Shadow Slave, Black Clover, and Tyranny of Steel references put together smoothly too, kinda catchy
The boy was no different. His name was Adam Constantine, a commoner from the Cormier Kingdom. As a child, he happened to come across a wandering Magus and learned that he had a talent for spell-casting.
Fantasy · Esenel
Other than the misplaced dialogue tags here and there, the writing is more than fine. Although it's not a 5/5, it's not a 4/5 either, so I'll give it the benefit of the doubt. The chapters are very short for my preference, but the story is smooth, and with plenty of chapters to read, the length of individual chapters won't be an issue. It's not always that I find books of this style, especially with reference to real-life geography. It can be pretty challenging as it is easy to critique down the line, but I'm not one of those people. It's a muddy, harsh road if you want this type of book to develop around these corners, but you have my green light.
A Bodyguard's Guard
Realistic · Ramens_theBestXD