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I think translator have to tone down the use of chatGPT(if he’s using it). There are just too many unnecessary descriptions which cause the readers to just gloss over the paragraph or just skip it altogether. I’ve been tolerating this for dozens of chapters, but now I thought I should point it out.
The night had begun with a gentle pitter-patter of rain droplets pouring from the inky black sky, but as the hours ticked by, the heavens unleashed their fury in the form of a torrential downpour. Streaks of blinding lightning illuminated the turbulent waters of the black lake, their jagged tendrils slicing through the darkness like ethereal swords. This sudden onslaught of nature's wrath sent shockwaves rippling through the murky depths, disturbing the slumber of the colossal squid that dwelled within.
Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
Book&Literature · FicFrenzy
"Of course, and this is normal." A senior sitting diagonally across from Rhys heard Rhys's sigh and couldn't help but show off to him, "In the future, you can eat ingredients like this every day - sooner or later you will start to feel bored by it. It's boring because the school only cooks British food most of the time."
Return of Salazar Slytherin
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
Blankly?
An ugly toad flew out of nowhere towards Rhys. Even though he was very aware of the benefits of toads, there was still a flash of disgust in Rhys's eyes when he saw the toad flying towards him blankly.
Return of Salazar Slytherin
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
Owner???
As for her owner Rhys, apart from occasionally going shopping with her in the shops in Diagon Alley, he rarely left Florean Fortescue's Ice-Cream Parlour- a shop selling ice cream and cold drinks in Diagon Alley. , the boss is an interesting little old man with extensive knowledge of all aspects of the Middle Ages.
Return of Salazar Slytherin
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
*Wizard*
Although she didn't understand how Rhys did it, she knew that the great magician in front of her had forcibly interrupted the process of transforming into a werewolf - this was simply a miracle and good news for werewolves! Except for a very few lunatics, who would be willing to transform into an irrational, bloodthirsty and violent beast every month? In the morning after a full moon night, her mouth was always filled with the disgusting smell of blood. Lupet couldn't even think about what happened last night. Rhys's spell planted a sapling called hope in her long-withered heart...
Return of Salazar Slytherin
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
Just a suggestion for the author. I’ve noticed your use of present tense in most, if not, all of you chapters. I believe past tense would sound better. Like “he slept like a long after he went back home”
Indra sleeps like a log after he goes home. He has cleared a dungeon alone and then went to help in defeating monsters coming out of a Gate. Obviously, he got tired because it was like clearing 2 dungeons continuously.
Un-Solo Leveling
Anime & Comics · PeekACoo
Neville:
ch 360 0359 Results of Training
Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
Book&Literature · FicFrenzy
So he fears death?
ch 193 Chapter 193 : Messed UP
HP: Magic Punk
Book&Literature · kamidemond
I asked too early
ch 0 6 Symbols bugs!
HP: I got Transmigrated into the World of Magic
Book&Literature · Kitamari
What is this �
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Very Long!
HP: I got Transmigrated into the World of Magic
Book&Literature · Kitamari
The suspense
ch 190 Chapter 190 : DADA Class 1
HP: Magic Punk
Book&Literature · kamidemond
ch 420 Chapter 420
Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
Book&Literature · Se7en
Didn’t he already have it?
Diablo himself is quite strong, I noticed he gained a Unique Skill from being named.
I'm a Daemon, so what? (Tensura/Multicross)
Anime & Comics · theogbasilisk
Milim Eye is an intrinsic skill
Unique Skill: Milim Eye has been Analyzed.
I'm a Daemon, so what? (Tensura/Multicross)
Anime & Comics · theogbasilisk
The male is walking a short distance ahead of the female, and as I observe them I notice the girl slip on a puddle, I stop what I was doing and jog towards her to help her up, I was raised a gentleman after all.
I'm a Daemon, so what? (Tensura/Multicross)
Anime & Comics · theogbasilisk
Master? Not Harry?
"Like what, Master?" Lutain asked, peering out and slowly sliding out of Harry's sleeve and onto his lap.
The Chosen one who goes dark
Book&Literature · TheBoredBoyGod