Webnovel Author: Kainedei - Fanfic Collection

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That's why I say again that the problem is the mc. He adapted-, sorry, in a few moments he forgot his entire past life and almost instantly adapted to his new life, including his status and power. that's the problem. If the MC acted as Overlord's Ainz, nothing would happen, but the problem is that the MC has no problem with his new life. That is, he imagines that you reincarnate as another person and from that moment on you will have to live a totally different life than the one you lived before. you understand?. The author said that in MC's previous life he came from an average family, he did not say that he came from a millionaire or billionaire family. And the most important thing, as far as I know, the MC was not an actor in his previous life, therefore, someone must have suspected the MC's change of attitude upon reincarnation, sorry, the MC adapted instantly, so instantly that There was no change in attitude. Now do you understand what I mean?

You're right, but again, the problem is mine alone, I'm not saying that the story is wrong or that the problem has to be corrected immediately or anything like that, I'm just saying that I don't like it, nothing more. Besides, you said it yourself, they are the ones who have been managing the finances of the Ricci family and it is assumed that the MC recently reincarnated. What I mean is that there is no way for those admins to have met the mc before for some to talk to the mc casually or worse, the mc, has no way of knowing them, after all he did not inherit the memories of the body, I think XD, I don't remember well what it was like. but in short, it's a problem I have with the story, just that. If that is corrected later I don't mind continuing reading the story, it's just that these things bother me, they are supposed to be their employees and they treat the MC as if he were their friend. and also, I know that I am not the best person to give an opinion on someone else's story, especially how my writing is, xd. but anyway I like to say what I think and it would be nice if the story improved, after all, there are especially few stories (Fan-Fic) that are at least decent on this page.

If you read below in the comments you will find the answer, but well, what I want to say is the way they deal with the MC. Specifically at the beginning of the story, I don't know if it was chapter 6, 9 or 11, in the chapter that is informed about the state of the SCP organization, the way they talk to the MC is the problem, they don't tell him sir, boss or any honorific, it is as if they were friends or colleagues of the mc for years, even though it is supposed to be the first time they meet the mc.

The level of writing is fine, the only problem with this story as far as my patience went, chapter 2, is the mc, one thing is being intelligent, another is being an idiot and the mc is an idiot.

First, the first chapter is just a log, it's not even a chapter. Second, the MC has everything given away and that's not bad, the problem is that he gets everything from the beginning and without any effort. Third, why is God/author going to improve the intelligence of MC, who is one of the most intelligent humans in history? He could give him some other ability that would be useful or improve his strength or speed a little, but instead of that improves the intelligence of one of the most intelligent humans, really? and for what?, so that he then behaves like a conceited idiot who knows everything and shows his abilities, that is, his inhuman intelligence to the ONI, yes of course, as if the ONI did not mutilate people, murder children or exterminate planets just because they think different from them.

What I said is that the mc adapted to his new life and body 1 second after waking up, that is, in less than 2 paragraphs he already adapted.

but instead of being like this or in some similar way, the interaction of the mc and the “employees” is informal, very informal, as if they were friends or acquaintances. The members of the high command 04 and 05 are also employees of the MC.

MC's interactions with his "employees" is the problem, instead of saying: MC looks at one of the men and women in the room and with a serious expression says, MC: "How are the corporation's operations going?" , upon hearing the mc's words, a man tenses and with some doubts, gets up from his chair and approaches the mc, then gives some documents to the mc and bows slightly as a sign of respect, Man: "for now they are going well sir".

Unfortunately I only say what I think about what I read, I don't give a shit where the story is from and I didn't know that.

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You answered your question yourself, they are the MC's assistants, they do not have the same authority as the MC and they are not from the high command either, at most they are 04, the high command is 05. and just so you know, it seems that you did not read the story , only those of rank 03 and below think that the mc is an assistant of 05-1.

The only problem I see with the story is the mc and the characters, 1- the mc seems to care little or nothing about his past and inexplicably, in less than 2 hours he had already adapted not only to his new world, but also to his new body and life, as if his past life as a normal person had never existed. 2- the characters have little or no respect towards the mc, supposedly the mc is the leader of the scp corporation, but no one respects him, everyone treats him as if he were an acquaintance or friend, instead of his boss. 3- the author says that the members of the scp corporation who are summoned by the system are loyal to the mc, but then the mc says that he has to be careful with what he says with those same members of the foundation so that they do not betray So what are we left with? Are they loyal to the MC or not? Those are the problems of fan-fic for me, if the author corrected them I think the level of fan-fic would rise quite a bit compared to other fan-fics.