Webnovel Author: Otaku_Gamer_00007 - Fanfic&Novel Collection

written very poorly it feels childish and Dumb makes no sense like just read the aunt mays response it makes no sense and there was a lack of scene and how it happened the characters are so one Dimensional it's painful it feels like a translation or writting by a child who can make a story in his head but can't write it out

atleast make the sex scenes better

cheap smut power fantasy no real Brain behind it don't even make sense uses stupid excuses but it is what it is

i still Don't like the smut and NSFW because I think you can write a good plot and it's a waste of time to write smut

I love this it was short but really good

overall garbage its a translation or whatever feels shit to read it like I feel I have to smash a Hammer in my head and get Dumb to understand this shit the plot is ass the MC is garbage its predictable as soon a X-men are involved plus the MC and girls reactions are so weird bruh like she just accepts shit so easily and goes with it

ok the author said there will be smut most of the story even he put it in tag his first chapter author note what are you incapable of not getting it that he will write smut and it will be just a mery sue strong guy who fucks bitches and pretend it's some gospel of God stfu

you must ignore every street sign this what a retard

40% will be plot 60% smut and where Do i got this number from I wonder lil bro go lick salt and get high