May be ambitious but not reckless atleast I think so tehhee
2022-03-07 Joined Global
And we Have Deneeys Pendragon. I was expecting the sword name to Be Exx---cal--baaahhhhhhhh
ch 176 Chapter 176: I'm Daenerys Targaryen
Book&Literature · bobthewriter
Well I type fast and didnot re-read it as I felt I have written too long
Temari , Karin and Kurotsuchi 🤣 Hey no need to do a love story fully .Lot of people go Tsuande and stuff.I was thinking why not putside leaf? Samui a Good choice . Well Or older ones like Yugao or Kurenai if you want Not fan of kurenai sasuke too much . Even girls from Fillers can be added . 🤣Temari and Karin is good choice and do Ino from Konoha if you want .
ch 0 4 Quick Poll of Sasuke's Future Lover(s)
Anime & Comics · One_Salvation
This really is nonsense I mean we donot even know who MC is and even where he is accept North and What year it is .And top of that the Starks are here asking his preswence? IT feels like Chat GPt .The interactions are robotic and why would Starks entrust him to Built fortress or anything? Who is he? IT feelks like it is. A gameplay walkthrough and also the system is bland.He doesnot dewcribe his system too much and doesnot explore .We know nothing .We are Jon Snow . The system gives him wood after he built lumber camp? I am not understanding it .Uf he gets rewarde aftwr doing things then what will he do .Beat lannistwr army and he can get Army himself ? If this is Kinhdom Building system then it is not goor system whatwver age of Empire is .He needs resources and he geta resources aftwr he do things like He needs tp build a Mill.He gets resources aftwr he builds a Mill .Wow And the Author is only replyong to people who comment nice thinks and do3snot even explain anything. I can get if its many comments but bruh got one and he is like speechlese? I think this is chat GPt . We donot even have information on his village people .
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Strengthening Winterfell
TV · Alak_Samba
I only have problem with Inbolving Blair witch project .I mean if You did Paranormal Activity it would have been better.The mpment you talk about Blair witch my mind immediately goes to chineese authors in Hollywood Fics using Blair witch.If you watched it you will know that there is nothing special in that your MC may even have Negative fans so I was little cringed out
ch 60 Investments and Reviews
TV · Illusiveone
And the thing about Magneto?
You should read your translations.I am not even talking about chineeese elements but you are making Mistakes in names even once he is jack once he is Ting ye .Also an orphnanage named wu in London of all Places is kinda dumb like these are minor things that should be first to be changed
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Rebirth?
Book&Literature · Trag115
Do you clearly see what hapoens when you just jump before not knowing ? If you understood what I said in first should these stupid argument gone furthur? Look to ypur first reply I asked about the exact same thing of why would you refer to her like that which I assumed was you having mis spleed pronouns because she is knows as she by Church people. How my asking of that gone to me liking Gabriel I have no idea . Clearly read comments in it My problem was simple You are making the characters OC and indeed fanfic doesnot need to follow canon but changing some aspects makes DXD fic pointless let me give you an example there are many fics of making the story characters oc but the core stays within their oc ness . Even you act as Asia it will seen through in first glance.Lets not even talk about that but You can clearly see yourself if you are follower All your characters have turned oc and nothing except their names and places mentioned will make people think this is DXD fic .
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Oh My God your brain is dull right ? Its not about you making her dude .Its about why are ypu writing her as Lord when clearly she is already depicted female .I was talking about you addressing someone as Lord who is clearly as she.Do you understand what I said ? I said why are you writing lord for Gabriel and even asked you that are going to call Asia lord as well. Read the lines .Does this mean I said you made Somone male nooo dude I mean clearly Someone should read amd see what really I talked about and where you are taking this . I mean really .Pointing out your mistakes in the story is a mistake. You didnot even understand what I said just going making assumptions man this is so funny .
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Really? Is this far your mind goes ? Its not about me liking Gabriel I just said that you excuse was ridiculous about it saying that you based that from Bible and all you got is I like gabriel ..I can clearly see where your thinking level is .Read the comment properly .Its not even about Gabriel .If you read it and try to ubderstand it properly then perhaps you can understand something. .
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The MC is too much stupid and too doo gooder .Yes author qill say who cares and dada but when a 2 year old does this nonsense I don't know which world ypu are in it will be difficult .He doesnot have anything to protect himself and he is 2 years old .He is just putting Target in his back .Yes warning parents is fine.He cpuld go other way like he had seen nightnares of them dying in poison like that .I Find it very ridiculous that if he is from modern world and Watched Naruto many times that still he dows this and the fuck is whitebeard route .He is just acting like adult . Author will bash me , I know this kind of authors .so I don't care . A fanfic is fanfic but atleast make it believable in sense of even Anime wold. Sakumo comming to Kill .what nonsense.An anbu cannot stop Sakumo. He is not Naive he is oversmart .A two year old cant fo anything he says even in Naruto world .
Going The Whitebeard Route In Naruto
Anime & Comics · OgreSon