Webnovel Author: GodOfLightning - Fanfic Collection

Yep sorry but bye his earlier card seems to be no longer working. I hat these major plot holes and don’t care if it turns out he is faking it it’s annoying not knowing what is going on.

And it would not there are the grounders down there he will still meet them you are trying to make it sound like there is only one way

Sorry got confused with thinking you were another author when I commented that I have been reading lots of HOTD recently forgot I read this.

That is not the premis that you have set up so you have majorly changed that as in the beginning in the description you don’t mention it at all what you mention is what happens when someone from Valyria of a more powerful dragon lord house than the Targaryens which is nearly any of them appears in the dance. This does bot fulfil that it sounds like you yourself don’t know where your story is going if you manage to constantly change what it’s about id recommend updating your description

You do know fanfic means based on the worlds setting etc right? Like the world itselfs basis has to be the same because it’s what both readers want and it keeps them out of any major legal trouble. You can look it up making major changes has gotten people sued and other stuff. Fan Fic is not what you are trying to make it sound like it is

This is it obviously you can’t recognize it my comments are known to be very much what readers agree with it you look at my history I have countless likes and people agreeing with me so if you act like this when people point out problems with your novel it explains the major drop

Ya sorry dropping. Its been a great story but you are taking to long on the whole military route and just extending chapters to make it seem like more. Plus now you are writing in Italian as well and I’m not going to keep translating just to read a novel. Keep up the good story though and sorry about the Ron of people that are about to drop from my experience of reading novels. From my experience when authors also write in another language without putting it in English next to it in branches or something they tend to drop it I’ve seen an author have excuses like you can look it up or it’s at the bottom etc but no one wants to do that to read a novel. So sorry but this is where it ends for me good luck though.

Yes and all the stuff I said also applies to 5e books what isn’t similar?

Why would he fear her? She has no power to intimidate him which is the only reason kids do listen to their parents especially for this time almost no one listened to women. They also didn’t really get a say in anything so she would really just accept this. Also all dragonlord families were greedy as is any noble they don’t really despise eachother for it and he would be too

? What do you mean? In the books he is very similar to targaryens in attitude and everything he is a,bilious and cunning and a genius at weapons. Also the starks and Targaryens have similar looks in everything but coloring and starks men tend to be more masculine. Both have long faces and are described as handsome or beautiful all the time and if you look at descriptions of their features they have many similarities

182 meters if 5’10 where is your math from?

The producers had to guess Jon snows parents to be able to make the show and they guessed rhaegar and lyanna and grrm allowed them to make the show

It does the author himself confirmed that before the tv show came out.

Wow you are a terrible author I can see why so many dropped it. Yes it’s yours which fyi it isn’t as it has characters from the 100 so this is an illegal book most just don’t peruse it. Most won’t do anything about people making fanfics on their novels but some do just because they do t persue it doesn’t make it yours. Claiming this novel as yours makes it even more illegal it’s why you will always seeing ,essages saying they don’t own anything etc. you can’t accept criticism and lost all your readers by doing things they don’t want to read. If you can’t deal with criticism or curve the story to the wants of the readers at all you should not write.

If you were in the military you would have been dishonorably discharged or in military prison. He military is extremely strict with its rules. More often then not you aren’t getting saluted as much as people think as there are more rules on when to salute then not to. This means anything unsure about usually falls under the no salute rule for example if you saluted an officer and he leaves the room then walks back in later you don’t have to resalute him even though it’s not strictly in the rules.