- 0 d Continuous Writing
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slevink
LV 1I like fighting, watching and writing.
2021-04-05 Joined VenezuelaBadges 3
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Too Bad! But anyway, thank you for giving it a chance, I'm sorry for all the mistakes, English is not my first language and I don't have that much time to work on the story either, I'm glad you made it this far and I will consider your comments. Thank you.
"No," Skyler replied, looking at her hands as she rubbed them, "Only in the Bio-sphere, my brother was right. He told me that you seemed to have much more experience than me in combat."
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Fantasy · slevink
Hey man, thank you for continuous reading. Intensity it's a choice the user needs to apply. It is like muscular tension if he does not apply and effort the intensity will be at the normal rate. In the future more things will be explained about the intensity and the effects that it got in one body.
ch 134 The Robbery at Diangelo
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Fantasy · slevink
thank dude. will double check
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Fantasy · slevink
thanks for the comments dude. I will need to get back on the corrections when I have more free time but I have already taken note of them. Really appreciate it
Ezequiel looked at Malcom, and his anger began to increase. Using his power, he created a rock dome that protected him.
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Fantasy · slevink
thank you let me double check
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Fantasy · slevink
I am currently having someone illustrate the characters. Will note this one. thanks man
Malcom looked at it with curiosity. It was a vest to place over the shirt, Malcom did not understand the usefulness when Jamal taking one of the new decks of cards, placed it on the vest causing it to absorb it, and on the black fabric, a tiny pattern in the form of a card was formed.
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Fantasy · slevink
thanks dude for continuous reading and hope you like what is coming next.
ch 89 The Ruptures
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Fantasy · slevink
thanks man. Appreciate all the comments by the way.
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Fantasy · slevink
Hahaha thanks dude
ch 88 The Hunters Association
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Fantasy · slevink
haha thanks dude
At this time, Albert was wearing a black suit, a white shirt, and a black-tie. Standing next to Albert was Jessika. She was also dressed the same way. Jessika was looking at him with a wide smile.
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Fantasy · slevink
Glad you like it! Thanks for the support!!
ch 0 3 A Cat In The Mirror (2)
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Fantasy · slevink
Thank you for the chapter
ch 16 - 6 Seconds
Epitome of Evil Book 1: Baptism of Flames
Fantasy · Zexekiel
Thank you for the chapter
ch 17 - Mind Games between Monsters
Epitome of Evil Book 1: Baptism of Flames
Fantasy · Zexekiel
Thank you so much!
ch 0 2 A Cat In The Mirror (1)
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Fantasy · slevink
hahahahah I understand, it will only be a couple of chapters if I remember correctly there are 4 or 5 chapters from hers perspective and we return to Malcom, I needed to show some things about her family. I'm glad you find it annoying, that was the intention. If you continue reading, you may like what follows. Thank you.
"No," Skyler replied, looking at her hands as she rubbed them, "Only in the Bio-sphere, my brother was right. He told me that you seemed to have much more experience than me in combat."
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Fantasy · slevink