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LV 14Hi, I was an avid reader of fanfictions. I have read so many that I stumbled onto MTLs. And now, I help to heavily edit MTLs and share them!
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14* in the MTL 馃槀馃槀 it jumps to 16 sometimes, but the majority of the time the age written was 14 for some reason 馃ぃ
First of all, I would like to say that this entire chapter has been completely re-worked from the original MTL. The direction and story writing in the MTL was so plain, boring, and full of gaps. So much so that I decided to use the general template of the MTL chapter and write my own. And if you've read the entirety of the chapter, you will know that I decided to include a certain family in my chapter and the reason why is because I had wanted to flesh out the background story of Luke and give him additional character depth. I used the Parkers because I wanted to keep myself open to any future possibilities :D Besides, this whole thing is an AU isn't it fufu. But then again, I may end up not using the Parkers as much in this translation since I don't quite know how they would be written in future chapters by the original author. I'm just an editor trying to make this story a more enjoyable read. I also attempted to establish a connection with Wanda in a more realistic way. The original MTL was just "hehe this is my wife, I love my wife, she is my wife." And Wanda being like "Who is your wife?! Ba- Baka *blush blush*". Please let me know how I did with this chapter, especially those who have read the original MTL. Do you prefer if I keep going with the direction that I'm going, or do you prefer that I stick to the original MTL direction, Let me know please!
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Unsure yet, at the moment I'm leaning to Nat being a "big sister figure", but at the same time, if the MTL plot is heavily dependant on Nat being with Wanda and MC, then I might just follow with the MTL too. The only thing i can guarantee is LukeXWanda
E/d: because I had removed the "Date invitation" between Natasha and Luke in C26, I had to also remove the dating scene in this chapter. The dating scene took place at a shooting range. I have already made plans to include this in future chapters, when Natasha and Luke get to know each other more and can start hanging out in places like these together as friends, and not a date.
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It gets revealed in the fifth Diary entry!! why it took so long is beyond me 馃槀馃槀
[It's a pity that Pepper has no clue what's about to happen to Tony. And while his kidnapping was a shock to the whole world, it did have a positive influence onto Tony. He came back a with a new outlook to life, and more importantly, it marked the start to his decorated career as a superhero. He cleaned up his act, his company and tried his best to make amends for his past mistakes.]
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Ahhh, not sure if the MTL has written a scene about it, but if they haven't, i might use it as a talking point between MC and Wanda if the MC wants to talk about his "first love" kind of thing.
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HAHHAHAHAHAHA, i have every music + feature of his saved and liked in my spotify 馃槀馃槀 80% might be exaggerating since i have alot of Hololive songs in my repertoire too 馃槀 I diversify by having like 1 or two songs from many diff artist, but in every Spotify recap, Bieber takes like 60% of my listening time xD but for this fic, i think i won't be using much of his songs, except maybe like "Lonely" or "Snooze"
(E/d note: Play "Love me like you do" by Ellie Goulding when you read this chapter. Start from 00:16 from this point. This was pointed out by a reader, and apparently, if you time it well, the feels hit at the right time.)
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it get's cleared up in future chapters, i Believe you've already read how he can back his made up stories 馃槀馃槀 But if not, then the system has a simulation feature that allows him to live the life he writes
[After what felt like an eternity, with a steady hand, I lowered my pistol and ordered him to lie flat on the ground facing downward. I had spent years thinking about how I would make the b*stard suffer, but in the end, I chose to arrest him and let him live. I chose to honour my promise to uncle Ben. And in return, I had found peace. True peace.]
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It's all made up btw. Whatever that is written in the diary is all fake and never actually happened 馃槀馃槀
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I am an enjoyer on both spectrums 馃憖 I'll have to wait and see how I want their relationship to progress, but you can expect a guaranteed Wanda ship
ch 33 C32 - Luke has Collapsed?!
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can check out author's comment section!! There's a ChatGPT version on my Patreon, you can check it as a public member. C31 and C32 was written with the help of my friend and she's pretty good at englishh
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I added some "time stamps" that you can try to time the song to hit. For example, the second chorus if it is timed to start exactly at the moment where Luke goes "I can't breathe! Please help me!", if you can time that part to perfection, then the emotional damage will truly be made
ch 33 C32 - Luke has Collapsed?!
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And when the Bridge comes in from this paragraph onwards, *chefs kiss* just perfect.
"Shh, I've got you," she whispered, her voice barely reaching him through the storm of his despair. Her hands gently stroked his back, tracing paths of comfort over the fabric of his shirt, a silent hand of support against the tide of his pain.
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I find that if you can time the second chorus of the song i recommended to the exact moment Luke goes "I can't breathe, please help me!", at that moment, the emotional strings are fully called upon!
His hands clawed at his collar, desperate for relief from the invisible chokehold. "I can't breathe, please help me! I can't breathe! I can't..." His voice trailed off into a whisper, the last word a silent plea hanging in the air. Natasha knelt beside him, her presence a beacon in the darkness. She reached out, her touch gentle yet firm, grounding him to the moment.
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Thanks for the compliment!!
ch 33 C32 - Luke has Collapsed?!
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Weeeeeeeeeeellllllllllllllllllll uwu
"You know, acting this way is cringe for someone as mature as you and is embarrassing to someone like me." Luke started, "Not to mention that I've already told you that you remind me of- HEY! DID U JUST LICK MY PALM?!" Luke exclaimed as he felt his palms get wet.
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Even I am curious how the MTL author does it .-.
'It seems that although we had meant well, the decision to have Wanda appear abruptly has backfired. I will have to report this to Fury, it will not do well if Luke does not recover from this metal collapse.' Natasha thought to herself.
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Yup Mental collapse xD Jisas, 'Metal Collapse'. imagine O_O
'It seems that although we had meant well, the decision to have Wanda appear abruptly has backfired. I will have to report this to Fury, it will not do well if Luke does not recover from this metal collapse.' Natasha thought to herself.
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH, it's just to avoid my forgetfulness. A few days ago i had only wanted to upload 1 chapter using the timed upload, but i forgot i had another timed for the same time and both got uploaded. Didn't realize until like 20minutes after they were uploaded. So to avoid that i time everything for a year later and then re-schedule chapter by chapter xD
C32 - Luke has Collapsed?!
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