Amateur writer with a poor sense of humor
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Did you even read the past paragraph? He has so much talent that he's having a hard time controlling it. Same thing why Naruto was unable to use clone jutsu, his Chakra was too much for something like that and was considered untalented. Well, Shadow Clones says otherwise, no?
It's been 6 years since then...
Anime & Comics · Daoist7642
T-The orphanage mother... can't slap him then. That's equal to being a citizen of England and slapping the prince.
Renji was just 4 years old when his bloodline activated, no one knew about it as his status as an Uzumaki Royalty, surpassed his identity of being the son of the mysterious man, who they knew almost nothing about.
Anime & Comics · Daoist7642
"Just Religion Things"
" you made me proud son, of all the humans you made me proud most," He said with immense pride in his voice.
Anime & Comics · Edgelord666
Gaia is technically supposed to be just Earth personified. So, it doesn't really matter who it is, because they're all Mother Earth. Except maybe that one from FGO.
At that moment all the anger vanishes and there were tears in my eyes. I know who she was, Mother Gaia the original one not from that wrenched Norse mythology.
Anime & Comics · Edgelord666
You guys don't understand. Viola because she is a character in One Piece!
A truck was going to hit a woman who was on her phone and I push her out of the truck's way. The truck hit me and viola I am dead.
Anime & Comics · Edgelord666
Ah. Yes. I truly understand this part. Sadly, because I liked writing, I still had to learn to write properly. Although, when it comes to exams I tend to throw everything nice out of the window.
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Anime & Comics · Edgelord666
I mean, put you in his boots, would you? Live for billions of years suffering from solitude and loneliness in power, reincarnated into a super weak body, and your first job just happens to be a trade of 2 supposed to be wedded people? And then, said supposed to be wedded people all go and fight. And, as weak as you are, you'd want to help her? No matter what his personality is, it's just stupid to help. Author is a dad and he probably knows more of what he's doing than what you, reading only, could ever know. You probably thought of saving the girl and get a harem or something. Disappointing.
Mo Xie on the other hand is looking at the event unfold, not interested in the least.
Eastern · OmnipotentDad
*Vasto Lorde Ichigo Go Cerrrrrrrrrro*
"Underworld? Hell?" Ulquiorra remember that there's a place called hell. According to what he heard that place was a very violent place and all the creatures there suffered for eternal. No one can leave hell because of the chain of hell. Once you're bound by it one can never remove it.
Anime & Comics · RuinKing0899
An updated review! Basically, the story is the pinnacle of what a good Kurumi fic is. The world of MHA and the unique duo of All Might and Kurumi is just soooooo Kurumi. The story isn't stale as he skips the already seen scenes from time to time giving chance to bring more on Kurumi. Kurumi which is the reason people are reading in the first place, the cute teasing with Midoriya is a classic and the banters with All Might is just 👌. Everything else is the same as my previous review, I'm pretty happy that the writer isn't a give upper or a pressure magnet. That sick counter with entirely skipping Nomu vs All Might~ Daz' sum balls son. I particularly like how you manage to pin down Kurumi's playful tendencies with serious situations and her analysis at stuff, especially with helping the principal after the attack. On another note, if I have to be honest, the book isn't entirely perfect. Don't get me wrong, for a Kurumi fic it's top tier, possibly the single most greatest if it continues this way. Just that the pacing seemed to have sped up sometime, I'd like more of Nightmare's missions please, seeing Kurumi in UA and Nightmare with the LoV is a good duality to show the 2 sides of the story as they connect eventually from time to time with us knowing how exactly Kurumi has affected everything. That's all keep up the good work author
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Haven't really read the fic, but since it's basically Date A Bullet but fanfic, I'd imagine the writer to fully well know what he's doing. Then I saw it's a multiverse that doesn't go into DxD, the confirmation of no Yuri and the slow pacing and I could already review this with just those alone. Writing Quality in this site is always a 3 for me regardless of whatever it is, why? Because Inkstone doesn't really provide much... flexibility in writing so yeah. Story Development is basically categorized into 2 things when talking about a fic, time skipping vodka or the slow wines. This is the slow wine so it immediately has a good ground for a good story, add the fact that it's Tokisaki "Bleh" Kurumi herself, you just can't go wrong. Character Design is fanfics with no OC is automatic 4 or 5 as long as they don't really break character, Kurumi is relatively easy to write and her personality is pretty much an anti-hero twisted justice bringing psycho. Nothing you can go wrong with as long as you know what you're doing really. Updating Stability good. Not dropped, good stuff, definitely not bad rates. It's well known in this site that as long as it's not dropped, there's updates. World Background to be honest, a multiverse fic can NEVER have 2 stars below in this category simply because the world is already done... However, you get bonus points if you expand on said universe more so. Though, I repeat, I haven't read the fanfic, I will do now. Continue the good work author~
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Both sides are actually stupid. The review is kind of correct, but too nitpicky. Things like that can be edited somewhere down the line to appease you really. Inkstone isn't a cruel no-more-edit type of place. The Author is stupid in that instead of being passive and just accepting the review and changing/adding details to whatever the problem was and everything is peaceful, he decided to be an ass somehow. As an author, you aren't really meant to react strongly against criticisms, even if they are poor criticisms, you should just make a smile emoji and move along. Never reply to whatever you think is a bad review. If the Review just politely asked for the details to be changed, and the Author said "Oh sure, thanks for pointing it out" this entire thing wouldn't even be anything big. Both sides are just completely stupid. As expected from Webnovel.
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Movies · AlienWarlord