Webnovel Author: Darwin111111 - Fanfic Collection

It's a shame that this story tries to be a funny written anime. Personally, I don't like the gender change, but it's always passable under a good script. But this is like watching bad fan service. I had potential.

That's why he hated Rob's episodes. It just feels more meaningful to appear with powers in another world than to have a god take you to another world granting wishes. Mainly because wish-makers make very specific wishes and literally some don't make the strongest ones because they want to make them 'interesting' which is stupid when you think they haven't tasted what it's like to have absolute power.

Wow, a kid out. Although I don't understand what you're complaining about. If you erase his memory and he's still evil, amen. Not everything in the world is good but you will know that it will not bother you. Although, well, I guess I just don't agree that I didn't give him the benefit of the doubt..

How can he make a real version of Sasuke when he's never seen him... It's a mystery.

My honest opinion from someone who did something similar. (Translated into English from Spanish) Continue it, but don't think about making it eternal or long. Think of an ending. If you can rush the ending without damaging your story, do it. This way at least you will finish them and understand how to start a story and end it. In any case, you can always give it a second 'book'.

You could say that I lost my sense of writing... Although honestly, if I tried really hard, I could write something... But I guess I should try again but with something simple. A Ones-shot, or a story. Completing a story would definitely help me see the important things. Eh... I don't promise that I will continue it, but I will try to write again I guess. Work has kept me busy.

The manga that the protagonist is haunted by is a parody. Nobody denies that, it is VERY obvious. It's hard to take her seriously when the protagonist doesn't. Just as it is difficult to take seriously a protagonist who bases his actions on 'X fictional character would do in my place', mainly the parodies... And the problem is that he says it, because of how he is written, as if it were oh really.

I don't know, I skip it or something. I don't have it so present in my mind, because if I remembered everything, I wouldn't be reading it two years later here.

I remember why I stopped reading it when I was on the other page. It was for this. Do not continue. I think the reactions are over.

This is the problem with Chinese fanfic. They want to have it all. If I had allowed you to confidently keep the crew with you even when you give them your power, taking away their power if they betray you, it would be fine. But they necessarily add (even if your partner has it, you will have the power)

This is just something I heard, but I'll say it: I saw a video where the host asks the police officer what it feels like to kill someone. The police officer said nothing, not because it was a lie, but because if you think about it without purely thinking that it is wrong, it is true. The problem is what comes after. You begin to feel like that person you killed is looking at you, judging you. And then you realize... Kill someone's brother/son/father. That's where guilt and the desire to make amends for what you did comes in. Probably feeling like a monster is less 'I'm a monster' than 'I feel like a monster'. Because feeling is one thing and another is self-recognition... Eh... Self-perception. And that's what I heard and created. I hope it helps you with your story. You have to listen to everything to make one 👍🏻. (Translated into English from Spanish)