Honestly thou, what is the point of the mc as this point? Just make the girl the mc. Mc is pathetic compared to her
ch 85 Cyclic Law Core Realm
Fantasy · InkSage
Forgot about the heart thing with that random dude, what missing memories 😂
ch 84 Missing Memories, Mystery of Another Heaven
Fantasy · InkSage
Def, with Aomine he hasn’t changed at all just got more stamina. Even thou he started training again where as in the show he hadn’t trained a lot since what the second year of middleschool? Where as Kagami and the rest train for a bit and are suddenly beasts. Would have been cool for aomine to unlock somthing new with him having trained again. Tbf didn’t think they where gonna win anyways cause mc hasn’t faced serin yet
With unyielding resolve, Kuroko mentally declared, "Whatever it takes, I don't care. I'll win this, even if it's the slimmest chance!"
Anime & Comics · mythoast
You do realize that any of the gom solo teams by themself. Doesn’t matter how senior the team mate are. The whole point of the anime was that they got so bored playing basketball cause they destroyed teams with ease. They lost the joy of playing the game and wanted to see who was the best out of all of them. The mc being able to beat one of them means he can solo teams. Him entering the zone enabled him to beat the whole of the gom. Which is poor from the author tbh cause it made no sense I think your forgetting he has mid on his team as well. This makes it so that they should easily win.. but the author suddenly decided nah let’s make him lose to some nobody’s ignoring the accomplishments shown throughout the stroy so far. It’s jarring af and is annoying to read
ch 42 Chapter 41
Anime & Comics · sixT9
Why is he keep trying to use the card and not save up for a better quality one ?
ch 35 Chapter 34
Anime & Comics · sixT9
Doesn’t matter much now haha but I would say personaly. Age wise you made it very hard on yourself As you made him out to be aincent like first soul in existence vibe it’s hard to find a suitable pairing. The closest one I saw that felt alright was that matriarch he knew. He is so respected it’s trying to find someone with that same reputation sort of. Hope this makes sense haha Currently I would say change love interest or don’t have one if you want to salvage it. Romance is very hard to write and it came make or break a great story
ch 69 Chapter 68: Bonding Over Business
Anime & Comics · AKD_Khmer
Smash this year out and I hope you crush your exams. This story was very promising and a good first start. You have listened to advise and recognize improvements to your writing you can learn from. At the end of the day this is all that matters and you will write bigger and better stories in the future because of this mindset.
ch 70 Please Read
Anime & Comics · AKD_Khmer
I’m ngl but feel when mc and yachiru get together is when ima drop this story. The paring doesn’t make much sense to me. If she wasn’t his disciple and his daughters sister then I could see it. Or if she was older When I read it I’m picturing them as kids around the mc and then trying to make yachiru be with the mc is kinda like a pedo In my mind ahaha But it’s like how will the two sisters call her in the future? Mother? How she was bought into the story the pairing just doesn’t match
ch 69 Chapter 68: Bonding Over Business
Anime & Comics · AKD_Khmer
THIS MAKES NO SENSE!! I’m have drop for a bit and see where it goes with the titles to see if I to continue or not. Everything that has happend so far just purely impossible to happen. Ignore the bs of the last few chapters and take this one as an example. Master of order and chaos came in to stop Gia from destroying reality? To calm her down? When the one who is at fault is Mephisto? For taking a soul that doesn’t belong to him? Don’t even mention he was able to hide it from them as he doesn’t have that power
ch 39 Chapter 39: Age of Ultron part 3: Fallout.
Movies · Saintbarbido
I don’t get what the auhtor is doing. The story was good so far but these past two chapters make no sense. In understand that you want to make it world ending but what he is doing rn is impossible. Like the aincent one might leave it cause she has seen how it’s resoveld but the Asgard stuff just doesn’t make sense
ch 38 Chapter 38: Age of Ultron part 2: Everything Dies.
Movies · Saintbarbido
Footballs a team sport with all positions being needed to succeed
"This is Blue Lock, and only one of you will succeed while the other 299 will be used to make him the best," Ego explained, concluding his statement.
Anime & Comics · Ppp_Pppp
Essentially, it’ fun to watch but in real life this show would make zero sense.
"This is Blue Lock, and only one of you will succeed while the other 299 will be used to make him the best," Ego explained, concluding his statement.
Anime & Comics · Ppp_Pppp
Would have been cool if he was a cam control the whole midfield and been the architect of the team
ch 0 5 Special Reward- Stun Ball
Sports · GREAT
Would have been cool to see him going agaisnt the ppl in blue lock
"Why would you represent such a country? Spain's national team is obviously way stronger." He couldn't understand my reasons.
Anime & Comics · Saint_Hubris
Because if you think about it aswell his clan with there body are beasts with Yang chakra, why they live so long. Now with this template the spiritual pressure is essentially yin chakra. So mixing the two together makes the mc 2x as powerful
ch 11 Ch-11 Sakumo's Despair.
Anime & Comics · Hkj
It gets to a point it doesn’t make sense. There is this thing called heart of the realm and if it gets absorbed the realm is destroyed. Mc won’t take it away and protect it cause he is afraid of his peaceful life being ruined…. But then if it is absorbed his peaceful life will be over cause the realm he is in is destroyed. He always says he has no strength but then as soon as his disciples need help he instantly kills the enemy. Its like he suddenly becomes self aware then instantly forgets it after. Picking and choosing
I See the Aura of the Great Emperor in All My Disciples
Eastern · Don't Let Me Stay Up All Night