Webnovel Author: CouchPotatoDandy - Fanfic Collection

I've read the first and second chapter and I couldn't find it in me to continue reading. The MC is someone without drive, goal or a purpose, not even any will to even reincarnate, which kind of ruined the flow of the story for me.

This is probably a Chinese translation fanfic, the attacks have names like "Haven foot Earth destroyer" etc.. Honestly I didn't quite found it interesting to read so I have stopped at chapter 5, although for some people it might be quite good.

Red till chapter 5 and lost interest. The way the chapters were written wasn't quite understandable or appealing to read. I found myself many times trying to understand the situation that was happening, and found myself moving backwards while reading to try to understand.

In this fanfic the author doesn't know the meaning of comma, many times I couldn't understand where a sentence ended in another started... I have only read a few chapters and lost interest fast.

The grammar is okay. The concept behind the plot is also quite good. But the author made the MC too strong very early and it felt like the author didn't know how to continue the story properly, so for me I lost interest quite fast.

That is what I call a review, thanks!

This is a good Naruto Fanfic with an interesting MC who used his wishes to become OP and live a good life in Naruto world. The MC is logical and acts like is expected of someone to act in certain situations. The grammar is excellent without too many mistakes, which for me is a must when reading. It is just a shame that I reached chapter of 59 and the author didn't publish any new chapter for over a year, so I guess this fanfic was dropped... But I will still give this a five-star review.

Okay, so I only read a few chapters Naruto will never start yelling about killing people, maybe beating them but not killing. This out of character of the various characters in this fanfic makes it hard to read. Also the translation leaves much to be desired 🤷

This is a good Naruto Fanfic with a very interesting system concept. The translation is excellent and I didn't see any problems with it so far. One thing that I found regretful is the personality of the MC, which is too lazy without any drive to do anything. I mean, he's a teenager who reincarnated as Naruto with a system to get stronger fast, what kind of teenager won't want to flex his strength and build a harem or strive towards some kind of goal? Now, this fanfic concept is quite good, so why was it discontinued? I will tell you why. It's because the flow of the events were not written good and it was written in an uninteresting way. The battle scenes were not captivating enough and many times one battle was several chapters long which made it easy to lose interest quickly. People were too stupid and doing idiotic actions that are not in line of their personality. And finally the reason for me to drop this fanfic when I reached chapter 58 is because the author nerfed Naruto way too much...