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Yalatola
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Dora was still fighting Gloria and had the upper hand, but Zury let him know that Mercy was about to die so he switched his target for now.
"Don't mix up my words, I could have finished her off if I pushed further, I just decided to change the order of execution. I know where to find Glutonny, but if someone steals Envy and Wrath, I will lose them for good. Your only use was as a teleportation point, you are not essential."
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Fantasy · Yalatola
no, the real Dora is the one with Midgard. consider that at this point there is 2 Dora (and I promise this is the last division) one is the real Dora, with Midgard and the other one is a sort of puppet with the memory of every Dora seen till now, but without understanding of his self He knows he isn't Dora but can become the True Dora by killing the remaining Sins (the true Dora in his memory would bring the end of every suffering)
Space returned to normal, and Sigma stood proudly above the falling debris. The other four landed in front of him, forced to face his joy.
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Fantasy · Yalatola
now anything could really happen and it will be crazy
"... Zuri?"
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Fantasy · Yalatola
please no
Bathing in the moonlight, Zuri stood in front of Dora's bed, wearing a sexy purple lace nightgown.Her naked body was almost visible under the see-through dress and her hair was better maintained than usual.
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Fantasy · Yalatola
you will soon get an idea of what is the true Dora
The fake Dora, fixating his gaze on the battlefield, arched his eyebrows.
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Fantasy · Yalatola
Soon
The fake Dora, fixating his gaze on the battlefield, arched his eyebrows.
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Fantasy · Yalatola
of the whole novel, it will be the longest arc thought, but it comes very soon, right after volume 6 and I'm currently writing the climax of volume 6
"Really? So we'll finally see Dora? We'll see him, right mom??" The woman's tired eyes smiled at her as she embraced her.
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Fantasy · Yalatola
I hope you will fight the struggle to do what I suggested in the notice. A little warning, the next volume will make your blood boil, but it's necessary.
"Thank you for the memories... Thank you for teaching me love."
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Fantasy · Yalatola
sides stories, in my plan: what happened between the chapters. The novel focus on major events but the side stories could be the daily life of Dora in each parts. But I learned that it's effective only after the completion of the story so not now, but maybe soon
ch 103 The One That Monsters Fear
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Fantasy · Yalatola
take it like this: greed is a "skill" that divides the soul of Dora. But if Dora could get another skill, like Sloth or gluttony, this would create a new form of Dora.
"You've known for too long now, we expected you to tell them today... But since you didn't, we figured you were just cooperating... But don't worry, even if you tell them the truth about us, they won't be able to stop us now, because they have no choice... Look around you, Player... Do you feel it? The change in wind? The floating energy that disappears? The thrill that runs through our soul?... It's already there."
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Fantasy · Yalatola
the answer might spoil you a little, every part of Dora (Sigma, Beta, Greed, Alpha, Omega, what's coming soon) is a part of a greater being: the true Dora. Each part is limited to what he knows, so as Greed is the origin of the personas he thinks he is the true(not accurate)
"You've known for too long now, we expected you to tell them today... But since you didn't, we figured you were just cooperating... But don't worry, even if you tell them the truth about us, they won't be able to stop us now, because they have no choice... Look around you, Player... Do you feel it? The change in wind? The floating energy that disappears? The thrill that runs through our soul?... It's already there."
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Fantasy · Yalatola
Way bigger than a redemption arc, just wait and see, and thanks
"You could have used one thousand techniques, but because it's more symbolic, you had to use a light attack. Thank you... For being such a typical idiot hero."
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Fantasy · Yalatola
Wait n see
"You could have used one thousand techniques, but because it's more symbolic, you had to use a light attack. Thank you... For being such a typical idiot hero."
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Fantasy · Yalatola
yeah, reason why i didnt go with everyone
ch 56 Marie(1)
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Fantasy · Yalatola
of course no, he is a Monster, but a Monster with standards
"She came to our room yesterday, apologized for everything, and asked us to come back with her. She even offered herself to us."
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Fantasy · Yalatola
download mobile legend and unleash your rage on newbies. Very satisfying 👌
" You see? Now that I also have a debuff, what use are you now? You were useless before but now you're just pathetic."
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Fantasy · Yalatola
You will feel very sorry for him
" You see? Now that I also have a debuff, what use are you now? You were useless before but now you're just pathetic."
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Fantasy · Yalatola
Caress a cheek before slapping it
"I won't teach you how to defend your honor, but seriously if it was me, I wouldn't have listened to all her bullshit. Do you see how she changed? Talk about a gold digger."
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Fantasy · Yalatola
ngl, yeah, very true. It was popular when I began the book so I followed an advice but it could have been written differently without it.
ch 18 The Price of Failure
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Fantasy · Yalatola
since Gloria is supposed to be ranked 2 it should be easier to deal with the other Sin first, and for the reason he wants Mercy alive you'll see it soon
"Don't mix up my words, I could have finished her off if I pushed further, I just decided to change the order of execution. I know where to find Glutonny, but if someone steals Envy and Wrath, I will lose them for good. Your only use was as a teleportation point, you are not essential."
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Fantasy · Yalatola