As soon as the guard woke up, John pulled out his knife and held it to the guard's throat. "You understand me, right? You have one of those little translators in your ear, right?"
Sci-fi · RazorReptile
Jenny almost gagged just imaging having to eat her food, a giant slug with slime covering every inch of the main body, yet no slime near the front or end of it, (The front and the end are indistinguishable).
Sci-fi · RazorReptile
It’ a good read. The early chapters are a bit rough with some areas being overly highlighted with step by step detail and then more important scenes being skipped or rushed. As the story progre this gets a little better but is still an area where the author could improve. The interaction between some characters could be molded a bit to make the scenes more fluid like when a character gets harmed but doesn’t acknowledge the pain or outcome of what that would be like to the continuity of that happening to them. The plot is good and reminds me of the many dragged into life or death (ranking) game genre. Looking forward to future chapters.
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She smiled and said "Yeah I love apple pies. Any pie really." He giggled and agreed.
Urban · nvreverfindme
Lots of audience and bystander talk this chapter
ch 10 Tournament Battle
Immortal Eater
Fantasy · TriadBrew