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GODOFCAT
male LV 2cat
2021-11-22 Joined PhilippinesBadges 7
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still on hiatus just wait lol
ch 546 Returning to the Shadow Realm
Hitman with a Badass System
Action · don_offl
tnx I decided to slowly reveal his backstory since if I wrote all of it, it will take 100+ chapters or more
"What the hell your sorry could do? Can it resuscitate innocent people? Can it revive my friends? NO! It can't do anything if I broke a glass and said 'I'm sorry,' will it get fixed? NO RIGHT!" yelled Daniel in a sarcastic tone.
World conqueror system
Action · GODOFCAT
yeah but Daniel had a reason... just wait for his backstory btw thank you for reading [img=recommend]
"Where were you when my friend was tortured in front of me? Where were you when the orphanage was massacred? Huh? Where are you? Probably watching it all happen," Daniel argued as the veins in his neck were about to burst.
World conqueror system
Action · GODOFCAT
No, I'm talking about people who didn't do anything serious crime like kill someone and stuff. Of course, there are also real innocent victims, such as the victims of the orphanage massacre (which is what Daniel said earlier)
"What the hell your sorry could do? Can it resuscitate innocent people? Can it revive my friends? NO! It can't do anything if I broke a glass and said 'I'm sorry,' will it get fixed? NO RIGHT!" yelled Daniel in a sarcastic tone.
World conqueror system
Action · GODOFCAT
what is confusing?
ch 0 4 chapter 4 the ancient one
World conqueror system
Action · GODOFCAT
???
ch 0 4 chapter 4 the ancient one
World conqueror system
Action · GODOFCAT
open your discord
He hurriedly plopped his body up against the tree as soon as he got behind it, he tore off his clothes and sat down. His hands began to tremble as he stroked his injured thighs with a soft garment; he warped it tightly while groaning in pain.
World conqueror system
Action · GODOFCAT
what kind of tense do you use?
ch 13 Never Drinking Again
Will Fate Bring Us Together?
Urban · Rayne_Rue
yep focus on your self
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Will Fate Bring Us Together?
Urban · Rayne_Rue
you should try doing something like this when you write a flashback btw I'm trying my best to use first person view so sorry I sat on the bench, looking at my friend which made me feel nostalgia. I closed my eyes as a pleasing memory flashed in my eyes. like that it's showing
*Flashback*
Will Fate Bring Us Together?
Urban · Rayne_Rue
to many AS
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Will Fate Bring Us Together?
Urban · Rayne_Rue
the story line was good and the grammar had a little bit mistakes but not to serious, the charather design was little but bland so i suggest to improve it then the world background was perfect, then the story development was still undecided since it was still on early stage then tha update stability it was good so everthing is 5/5
The heroes are psychopaths
Fantasy · CainZerWilliam