Webnovel Author: PacificIslander - Fanfic Collection

yeah...

I just read chapter 2 so I'm gonna leave an honest review of what was so far the grammar, is bit jumbled over the place. by that I mean that it's great at some points and gets weird as hell like "I'm a fuck puppy" the lack of capitalization in the story is kinda bad too everything else is ok I guess lol

rewrote chapter 1 so it's better

give me one stars, because I'm #1 snas

Ok I'm pretty sure I lost more braincells reading this, (sorry) but the protagonist literally generates points where he can use them to create stuff or summon stuff I assume. He makes entire sewer pipe systems, but then he calls water 7 (somehow he knew Iceburg's number) to sell wood FOR MATERIALS which he can literally summon. Also, worker shortage apparently because they lack people when there are people that can literally clone themselves, hell he could summon Naruto and make him clone tons of people with one summon. Also summoning the most normal people when he can probably summon gods. Somehow creates an entire palace by himself, his summon? It never said who helped him, also Hashirama's clones have a so much of concsious apparently, that the owner Hashirama himself has to ask his own clones to do things. Ars is refered to as his majesty, but despite that calls iceburg Iceburg-san who is just a ship builder compared to a king. MC literally created rings that holds dimenional storage of a good 100 cubic meters or something which he gives to Hashirama to transport and sell wood. Also the system literally disappeared, where the hell did it go I haven't seen it in a bit

(go to end if too lazy to read lel) Sorry this is my opinion based off of reading the first two chapters but. There's not really much information about this story in general, it doesn't really beat around the bush and just goes into the story without any real preparations for the main character. A few things at the start already don't make sense, there's a system which is alright I guess. My only complaint here is that everything is just convinient at the start, the only sort of *work* that the main character puts into it at the start is literally just dividing territories for the future. Also it seems that the system has a conscious and is also named a feminine name. The main character literally has immortality ( and his summons as well, ) along with being able to summon Hashirama Senju at full power at the age of 18 being empowered by haki. Plus he gets instant loyalty. Also somehow 9 million people INSTANTLY hear of his kingdom in 4 seconds because apparently a woman who can see into the future tells everyone. (yes, 9 million no joke) along with that he has a fog that protects his land for 2 years TLDR; bunch of plot holes, immortal MC+his summons, 9 million people, fog that protects his land for 2 years at the begining, his first summon being Hashirama Senju from Naruto whos 18(immortal) and strong cuz haki. I'll read more and change my review if it becomes any better