Ahh, yes, defeat one if not the strongest Jonin in the village, and a promotion to that exact rank is considered unfair to others... I get it; you don't want to push the MC so far up the totem pole you can't see him anymore, but the logic you are using is flawed to the point of stupidity. I also get that this is somewhat of a crackfic due to the fact that the young student body can simply watch a duel versus the village elite like that of a game of sports when they are, in reality, Ninjas who do not need to constantly show off like some sort of dog participating in contests.
Hiruzen wanted to directly promote Ryujiro to Jonin, but that would seem unfair to other students and even to other Genin and Chunin present in the village.
Anime & Comics · plotplanner
Probably no consequence, as the setting of every character is like that of an NPC nodding to the MC's whim at every turn.
"This is the jutsu I'm going to teach you, the Rasengan."
Anime & Comics · plotplanner
Proof-reading is weak with this one.
"I've come back hell," I replied, as I looked at myself which reverted to my true appearance as Theus.
Anime & Comics · Dr_Frauds
It's most likely Grammarly's auto-correct, as "Petra" is a female name, which was most popular around the 60s or 70s. And I guess the correction software registers it to be so as well.
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Anime & Comics · Poponioko
And don't forget the fact that his AI already has "Conquered" the interwebs, so to say, and can gather blackmail on one of the richest individuals on his planet while securing him a massive amount of wealth to help secure himself if he only used 0,000001% of "Tony's" overall IQ.
I also need more Chat Points or a bloodline to become stronger.
Anime & Comics · Sothisq
"Immunity" be like:
Based on the description, this potion totally limits the demon's influence on the human body.
Anime & Comics · Sothisq
...Hacked the internet? Seriously? Why would anyone need to "Hack" the internet?
"Have you already hacked the Internet?"
Anime & Comics · Sothisq
Then what stops you from instead changing it from "older brother" to sibling? :P
"Who are you?" I asked calmly as ever, but no response came for a couple of moments before the very same voice gave me an answer. "Let's say that I'm your patron's older brother if I were to use your mortal hierarchy, I do not possess a name but you do and it's quite rude not to introduce yourself."
Anime & Comics · Rtanj
I already feel good about this fic. An author with good taste knows to shy away from such a nightmare-fueled reality such as all the consuming ching chong!
"I was about to leave the house after a Starcraft workout when everything went black and..." He suddenly realized what kind of shit he got himself into and put his hand on his face, "Not Chinese romance, not Chinese romance..."
Anime & Comics · MrBlackWing
"Didn't I get shot directly in the head while clashing with the enemy army and I been killed?"
Anime & Comics · Yass_Odyssey
I think the bot had a stroke?
So... ChatGPT is hard at work huh...
In the grimy, rain-soaked streets of New York City's Queens, a relentless downpour painted the scene. Amidst the murky backdrop, a diminutive figure darted through the alleys, clad in a battered hoodie that struggled to fend off the persistent rain. The faded grey t-shirt underneath clung to their skin, and weathered pants, accompanied by shoes that barely clung to life, completed the ensemble. A worn cloth concealed their face, shielding them from both the elements and the harsh reality of the surroundings—the drug-ridden, alcohol-soaked, gang-infested slums of Queens.
Anime & Comics · Bulale_Abali
His grandfather seems to be one of those bullshido grandmasters on youtube, however, he's just a normal soldier who became intimate with the avatar and suddenly got spirit cancer...
But before he was defeated, he was holding Aang's shoulders with his hands as tightly as possible. He somehow absorbed a piece of Raava, the spirit of light and peace and also the Avatar Spirit.
Anime & Comics · some_writer
He's one of those... you know, those nasty basement-lurking harem fanatics who believe that a relationship like a harem represents just "Works"
But Scott managed to activate this ability with only a 5% chance of activating, he had to admit, this really was pure luck, mainly because Alex didn't use any Admin power to help Scott.
Movies · NunuXD
I've read the last few chapters, and I think you are doing well, maybe shift around with how you structure sentences, like "Finally I did this---" Into something akin to..: And when I finally reached this point, I did this---" Which will make it seem more descriptive and less stiff. Perhaps extend the chapters and leave some explanations in a small A/N at the bottom part of the chapter.
ch 0 2 chapter 2
Anime & Comics · emir_adar
That makes two of us, and I completely agree. However, I based my reply on the fact that this fic did not manage to reflect her character in the slightest, making her seem like a Dumbledore after saying this calmly: "Harry, DID YOU PUT YOUR NAME IN THE GOBLET OF FIIAH!?"
"I wasn't expecting to ever see one of your kind again. Not after the massive crime that your father committed against this world! You better give me a good explanation Angel!" The Ancient One glared at me as she spoke.
Movies · StarWaves
And you shouldn't as she is used as a glorified plot device to develop the main character.
"Mom, you haven't called me that since I was two," Saya whispered, weakly smiling, but then tears began to gather in the corners of her eyes. "I'm sorry I almost left you alone, Ryo-chan!"
Red Nara
Anime & Comics · l_legolas