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Do not exist
Not for the next few chapters!
It will take a while because I intend to develop a part of Ron to change the course of the standard story.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 - Forget!
Movies · Toruu
Paollo is not Poseidon. Try another.
ch 66 Chapter 66 - "I Don't Believe It's You!"
Movies · Toruu
I started using it in later chapters. I think it has improved, I see almost no grammatical complaints like before. I need to tidy up these first few chapters, but I'm too busy.
"Oh no! Now it's time for family dinner. I'll deal with work issues later," she said, putting her cell phone in her pocket. "And you named me two girls. Are you interested in one of them, are you?", she said with a laugh. "I remember last year you were scared to death to talk to girls. I'm glad I'm able to make friends now", she added, biting into her snack right after.
Movies · Toruu
OK, let's go. The protagonist... I liked that he has a backstory and that he is having personality development, as reading about some protagonists that have appeared recently was tiring me a little. His family... so far I'm enjoying his interaction with his family, I think it could improve in some parts, mainly to show him developing more with his mother, since so far the contact with her hasn't been that much, but with his siblings and father are great. Is the system... an OP system? Yes, but less than I thought it would be. From what I read in the synopsis, I thought he would really become the best singer in the world in a few days, but the development is much more realistic, which is much better, since if it were like the synopsis I don't know if I would be able to read it. . I'm seeing your clickbait Nunu! Update stability... so far it's ok, the chapters are long, from what I've seen it already has some advanced chapters, so I don't have much to comment on that. The background of the world... so far is being explained slowly, there is still a lot that hasn't been shown, so I won't say whether it's good or bad, but what has been shown so far is very consistent. Overall, a 4.8/5, keep posting and I'll keep reading :)
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Fantasy · NunuXD