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SirDemiLich
male LV 5don’t mind me, just your average normal reader passing by,
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But don’t let my criticisms get to you, this story is so good that the most I can do is nit pick
2.) How's the Balance between the major pillars of Persona? (Social, Metaverse, Romance, Mystery.)
Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
Video Games · BonVoyage
A little heavy on the social, but I guess that’s mostly what we’re here for. I wish there was a few more casual mementos runs, and palace infiltrations run a little bit long, it would be great if they were like 15% shorter. The romance is great, fantastic, keep doing what you are doing. The mystery is intriguing, but you are a bit obvious about a lot of things, so I would say either give up on the mystery and just reveal things, or stop having characters drop so many hints. The Elizabeth chapter in particular revealed a bit too much for how early it is.
2.) How's the Balance between the major pillars of Persona? (Social, Metaverse, Romance, Mystery.)
Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
Video Games · BonVoyage
Ahem… she’s 14
- It's just that our Mistress needs a healthy and hard cock," the soldier says quietly, but so that his friends can hear, confidently.
Avatar The Last Airbender: Spirit
Anime & Comics · FanFictionForge
"Yeah, because our Trickster didn't mess it up this time." Caroline teased, giving Ren a smug smile.
Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
Video Games · BonVoyage
However, I'm going to listen to the advice the game gives you at every loading screen and take my time. Basically, everything after Takemi walks into the room is me taking back the reigns from Sonic. Threw that hedgehog into the pool, lol.
Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
Video Games · BonVoyage
"Eh... sure, throw 'cat' on there too, I suppose. It's kind of the reason I am such a good spy" Mona conceded after a brief pause. He then leaped to the foot of Ren's bed to settle down for the night. "But if you're adding 'cat,' make sure it's at the bottom of the list."
Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
Video Games · BonVoyage
Maybe regular people can feel that “something” is there, since personas are much more powerful and noticeable than Morgana speaking and Ren’s eyes. But it could be like hollows in bleach, invisible, but *felt*
"In that case, we should let the rest of the group know. Right now, we are going against the director of the SIU, Okumura, and whoever their boss is. They all have a lot of influence. If we can summon personas here, then we might be able to protect ourselves better if it comes to it."
Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
Video Games · BonVoyage
Tartuffe is Nyx confirmed?
"T̵̛̛̪̬̠̲̯̲͇̪̠̣̜̱͚͎̖̘̣͔̯͍̋͑̐̋̄̈̅͗͐͛͛̎͊̇̄̽̅͜ͅḧ̴̨̟͚̝̲͈̙̫̤̹͙͚̠̯̪͓̠́̽͋̓̾̓̄ͅe̶͇͉̪͈̥̓ ̴̨̨̨̛̺̗̙͕̲̲̼̙͎͖̈́̀̈́͗͐̓͐͋͐͗͑̚͜ͅä̷̧̛̛̻̜̤̞̘̤̞͖̯̔̀͑̋̀̿̐̀̅͝ͅr̷̝̺̺̣̠̊́c̷̡̩̦̝̯͖͍͚̦̥̜̰̞̲͔͓̿͒̉̌̓͒̍̾͊̈́͊̕͜͝a̸̧̨̨̛̬̹̩̠̖̳̘͓͙͓͎̘̞̳͔̱̩̙̓͋̎̽͂̄̐̊̀̕͝͝ṅ̴̨̛͚͎̝̯̗̻̣͖͇̼̪̰͓̙̊͐̋̌̈́̌́͆͒̈́́̀̇͗̒̽́͠͝a̵̧̡̺͔̳͉͈̮̦͔̟̟̻͇͐̾̊́̋́̓͐̎́̄̒̂͒̈ ̷̢̢̢͖̠͈̞͙̘͕̬͔̣̹̇i̵̡̲̟̻̜͖̝̫̺͉̗͕̲̻̬̘̭͍͇̳̍͋̂͐͋̈̄̒͊͂̽͋̈́̅̇s̷͕̤͔̹̜̮͙̱̩͇̉̓͐̑̇̓͛̈̐̐͐̚ͅ ̴̻͎̝͕̲̺͓͚͖͖̥͖̯͉̗̣̮̥̟̈́̀̌̕͠t̵̛͉̱̝̖̘͓̼̬̼͙͑͑͛͆͛̏̀̃̈́̍̏̿̍̅̀͜͠͝h̸̨̡̻̝̬̯̞̼̘̣͔̣̲̱̩͈̱̣̱̄̇͘͜͠͠͠ͅĕ̶̢̠̪̻̼͙̦̰̹̉̉́̋̅̅́̀̆̈̈̕͝ ̵̪̘̳̺̦̘̒̂̾̎͗̔̑̏͜͜m̶̢̤̞͓̖̝̩͒̔̅͑̑̆́̓͋̓̆ë̸̲̩͚͊̕a̴̡̨̧̛̙̤̤̣͓͉̱͖͓̥͍̰͉͒̾͑͛̅̀̾̈́̍̓͝n̴̢̨̧̧̡̫̖̬̼͔͚̜̲̫̻͎̪̙͂s̴̺͑̀̓̎͊͋̓̄̅̓͐̕ͅ ̵̧̧̢̧̫͇̥͍̳̜͖̰̠̳̞̝̺̙̱̙̤̅̃̌͛̃̓͛̑̊̿͆́̈́̇͐̿͆͝͠ͅb̷̧͙̜͚̰̫͓̻̺͖̩̺̳̈y̶̡̝͍̖̖̘͎̟̣̼̜͛̎͐͂̆̋ ̴̱̯͎͉̹̘̳̯̭̺̻͚̳̝̟͍̮̬́̋̆̇̐͒͒̈̿͂̏͌̿̌͌͆́̚͜͝w̸̧̢̢͓̞̙̪̼̤̙͂̅͒̓̌́͊͆͐͂̅͋͝ͅh̵̹̑́̅̋̌̕͘͝i̸̛͙̣̟̭̼̣͂̂̓̀̅̾̄ç̸̯̝͙̦̬̞͇͓͚͈̭̙͇̼̺̹̇̔̓̿̈̊̚͝h̸̡̝͈̱̺͍͉̻̙͍̪͙͓͖̜͕̃̅̊̀͊̆͗͂̈̄͑̑͐́̍̕͘͠ͅ ̸̡̢̡̪̙̖̭̮͕̮̺̜͈̖̬̝̩̎͂̿͆̆̅̀͌̍̔͐͋͑̈̐̍̈́̃̓̕͝͝i̵̢̦̥̩͕̩̤̮͇͚̒̀̉̎̈́̽͐̚͘ș̵̨͖̺̹̰͉͖̌́̏͐́̆̒̇̽̄̑͊͂̋͌͌͝͝͝͝ ̴̢̻͔̫͇̏̀̈̅̾̄̊̽͐̋͗͆́̒͛̏͘̚͝ạ̵̺͉̟͍̤̭̫̝̣̹̖͇̱͓͓̹̣̥͈̳͊̈́̀̀̋͋̿̍̔̀̈́͘͘̚ͅļ̴̢̛̛͎̟̗̼̳̞͎̙̤̜̟̲̮̺̼̦̑͗͌͐̅̈͋̊̈̀͜ͅļ̵̛̤̹͓̲̫̥̳̬͓͇̐͆̓͗̏́̾̈́̈́̽́̌̃͠ ̷̡̛̟̳̙͇̮̯̮̗̞̄̐̀̿̽͆͐͋͌͌͌̕̕͜ȓ̷̨̜̫͍̩̫̼͚͎͇̮͓̲̙͙͇̩̘̲͓̂̊e̴̹͛͂͠v̷̨̻̜͚͇͕͙̘͔͔͍̭̠͈͇̄͊̾͒̈́̈́͑͂̇̀͐͑̏̑̾͘̕͠ę̶̨̡̛̖̫̹̖̺̘̹̻͎̣̮̮̻̥̮̞̠͆͗͋͌͒͛̿̑̊͛̓̂̋̕͠͝á̶̞̙̩̘͈̆͂̀͆̎l̸̡̨̝̻̗͎̪̰̙͐̈́̾͑̾̈́͛̋̕̚͝ȅ̶̛̳͙͐͒͊d̵̙͖̗̟̫̼̣̪̦̍̽͆̈́̽́̌̅̈́̀̏̄͐̀̃̒̅̇̕͘
Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
Video Games · BonVoyage
Though Akechi had crossed paths with them in the Metaverse, there was also almost no chance that he had followed them when they met with the principal in Mementos. Whoever was carrying out the mental shutdowns might be able to slip by them, but he wouldn't be able to do the same with Jose around. The kid was connected to Mementos, so anything that happened near him would be noticed.
Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
Video Games · BonVoyage
I think you mean ‘back from killing Kaneshiro’
"The meeting for my school project was unexpectedly canceled, so I'm available to assist with the investigation tonight," Akechi announced, entering with a warm smile.
Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
Video Games · BonVoyage
Taro Tanaka?
"Ah, you catch on quick, don't you? You're practically one of us already. From here on out, 'Akira', you can call me 'Taro'," he remarked, his chuckle betraying a mix of approval and amusement.
Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
Video Games · BonVoyage
The matter is transmuted into the persona. As for why they wanna transmute money specifically? Well, the will to live leaving your eyes is a necessary ingredient
"Behold the power that we are able to provide you with!" Caroline said in a proud voice as she pointed at the mask. "Make sure you gather personas and continue to bring them here. That way, you will continue to become stronger and more capable of entertaining our master."
Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
Video Games · BonVoyage
I think the inclusion of doc personas could be very cool, but they would have to be earned, like after the fights with the p3 and p4 protagonists, or during the events of PQ2 if you include that
As they danced, the masks they wore started to glow intensely. Their movements began to mirror each other. In a climactic flourish, the masks they wore ignited in spectral flames, converging in mid-air before transforming into the visage of a jackal. The mask of Anubis, god of the afterlife, holding a pair of scales in one of his hands.
Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
Video Games · BonVoyage
Even better
I'm thinking of giving Itadori a love interest in this story. Who would be the ideal girl?
Jujutsu Kaisen: Becoming the strongest as Yuji Itadori
Anime & Comics · TheJiujitsuGuy
Waoh new chapter
The background is different and the eyes on the right are slightly looking up
Yang raised her finger as if she wanted to argue before lowering it and shrugging. "Fair."
Streamer in the Omniverse
Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
(I decided to make this Omake non-canonical. I'll see if I include something about MLP in the story later or create a separate MLP story. For now, I'll let it be something on its own.)
Streamer in the Omniverse
Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
😩 (domain expansion, infinite backshots)
Takako Uro.
Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt
Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4