Check out my first novel, Traveller's Will: https://www.webnovel.com/book/traveller's-will_25553012106498105
2018-12-28 Joined Brazil
Nice callback and reflection of her lifestyle and now facing her new reality
ch 14 a normal night
Fantasy · Moonflower414
What a tragedy
ch 0 1 She felt maimed
Fantasy · Moonflower414
The man must be very angry to do with a coffee mug xD
Before the Editor's assistant can finish her report, the Editor's face got more irritated and slammed her coffee mug at the table.
Urban · UelUel
Nice! Breaking down like the Joker
ch 0 7 I'm A Coward!
Fantasy · Nekoman
It looks really interesting, it kinda of reminds 'taxi driver' and 'blade runner' vibes. Gonna read it, and cheers from a fellow author :)
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Rain Like Memories
Sci-fi · Arron_Alderson
You're welcome :)
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Urban · Tls13
This was truly refreshing to read. It's "warm" it puts a smile in your face. My biggest issue is the writing, that needs polishing in both structure-wise, and how the style itself in the sense of pacing-flow. For this I recommend you to read more known books, like The Name of the Wind. I hope you go well with your story, all in all, keep up the good work.
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Tip: when its thoughts, use the 'italic' in the editor, because its known globally to indicate thoughts
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Tip: "Calling a mother to her child to have breakfast" sounds a bit weird, maybe: In fact, you don't need this sentence for two motives: Mother is already mentioned in the dialogue, and breakfast too.
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That girl healer sounds like a psychopath trying to charm her victim xD
ch 0 4 The Healer
Fantasy · SayofChains88
This reminds my time playing Mu online back then
ch 0 1 The PlayerKiller
Fantasy · SayofChains88
Good start! Keep it up :)
ch 0 1 Corpse after corpse
Fantasy · WRChowdhury
Thank you <3
If you enjoy a story that envolves murder mysteries, magic and kingdom schemes, then you may enjoy this novel. The tragedy and tone is so poetic and sad, that reminds the song 'Gavin Luke - The Crossing'. The author also do a good job of portraying the transitions of lifestyle and the way that the MC see the world.
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Fantasy · Moonflower414