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male LV 13I'm a guy who's new to writing and has a few idea's for stories and I hope that over time I get better at writing/stories ideas and will be able to get a good community who read my story's .
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so I a rixis goes out and kills an animal for food every day that no points given put if it makes a big discovery. Or fights a strong monster from outside rixis lands, then it will get points for the hunting side. it's more the risk factor that gets you points.
"So I'm not getting points for them hunting, but killing an enemy or some type of significant research or act gets me them the best amount"-Jack
The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
yeah, I'd rather you do. I'm not perfect, and I use grammarly, but some things still slip past, so thank you. If you do, it only makes the work better.
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The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
thanks fixed it 👍
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Sci-fi · MRgold1
I have an idea of something like them yes
ch 163 Devoured by loved ones
The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
no it would dissappear but they could be blessed by a god of decay or something similar
ch 163 Devoured by loved ones
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Sci-fi · MRgold1
fixed it thanks.
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Sci-fi · MRgold1
yeah, they do get an attack force, but I didn't include that since I'm gonna for a chapter after Jack's is over.
ch 159 The other disasters
The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
correct, so they are very close. There is another that is close aswell but they will have at least a few biomes in between them. they'll start appearing more in chapters once the tribal stage is over. That's when candidates start battling and scheming.
ch 157 Blood soaked sand
The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
1. yes, they would be raised if they were killed after the undead appeared, not before. 2. there are multiple native tribes and this is a spoiler, but kingdoms, but I'm keeping those for once. Jack reaches that stage, which will be very soon.
ch 157 Blood soaked sand
The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
All I can say is that he created them, so some of his personality will be mixed in, and they're all friends, so they'll act similar to one another. I think there's a bit of Jack in each of them, and they reflect differnt parts of himself.
ch 155 Moving forward
The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
yeah, but I guess they're evil because there are those who aren't religious who don't attack those who are. while those seen as evil actively destroy and ruin everything they can.
Many of these groups were fresh and green, but some vertrans were still kicking around. They managed and guided these groups of youngster down the clean and righteous path and vowed to purge all evil in the lands.
The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
New race without any skills or time to evolve and get stronger and is similar to human life spans of the time before modern medicine.
current lifespan:0-40 max
The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
No lizard men, the creator wanted dragons but couldn't make them at the start, so he is doing the next best thing.
ch 0 -7 images of the races
The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
ch 57 The second day of the wave part 1
The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
Also the candidates get a skill every 100 years not decade so every 10 years a wave happens and on the 10th you get a skill so 80 years going by as said would be 8 waves and no skill by but another 2 you would get one.
The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1