its just too dark and grim. im afraid that it would turn off most readers (since the demographics here prefer 'lighter' themed novels)
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Fantasy · echogillana
best way to curse in front of teachers is to say aish shibal sikya
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Fantasy · echogillana
arigato gozaimasu! may the daoist spirit be with you
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Fantasy · echogillana
just the overall grammar has to be checked. the character is well fleshed out as a paranoid person (which is how normal people would react and personally, i like that he's normal and relatable)
ch 0 2 A Case of Mass Hysteria
Fantasy · HANA_4345
yawning, arses off, (commas)
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to honk
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was woken up // reached
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what the MC kinda looks like (i'm not great at editing)
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Fantasy · echogillana
thank you! i'll keep you posted!!
i think physical condition here should be 'fighting ability?'
I Can Only Summon Cannon Fodders to Survive the Apocalypse!
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