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Liboedaois

Liboedaois

male LV 4

I hate romance

2018-01-28 Joined Indonesia

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For me, your novel is very good and detailed, but I think you could add more depth to the interactions between the various characters, making the characters look more alive. and his insight is too opportune in my opinion, he can understand martial arts without any foundation in martial arts. At least you have to make him have the basics, such as stacking martial arts books, to make better martial arts.

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what is your name? tony **** you tony,,,,!!! what is your name? ezekiel **** you ezekiel!!!

"Goodnight Ezekiel," My mother and Mikasa say with a warm smile. Who could harm such beautiful people? They both now leave my room. So my name is Ezekiel? Hmm I can always try to change it. But it does sound cool.

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