For me, your novel is very good and detailed, but I think you could add more depth to the interactions between the various characters, making the characters look more alive. and his insight is too opportune in my opinion, he can understand martial arts without any foundation in martial arts. At least you have to make him have the basics, such as stacking martial arts books, to make better martial arts.
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Doorrings
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Haunted System
Anime & Comics · BlackGoku222
Who his name xin or lou?
ch 0 3 Xiao Yi
Anime & Comics · LittleApple
Grammarly
ch 0 2 Death Finaly Arrive
Anime & Comics · LittleApple
this pubg mobile oke
"It's Tensent, all right..."
Fantasy · Watering Horse while Gazing at Qinchuan
dao of bullshit
"Because you are my friend." Chen Feng smiled.
Book&Literature · DivinDragonEmperor
what is your name? tony **** you tony,,,,!!! what is your name? ezekiel **** you ezekiel!!!
"Goodnight Ezekiel," My mother and Mikasa say with a warm smile. Who could harm such beautiful people? They both now leave my room. So my name is Ezekiel? Hmm I can always try to change it. But it does sound cool.
Anime & Comics · GhostyZ
Nice book mate
ch 206 Chapter: 204
Singularity in Primal Chaos [Completed]
Anime & Comics · meatball_san