you're incredibly talented girl
you think it'll be better if i read after all the extras of worldbuilding are out? or will it make no difference in the story itself?
As book 1 is already complete, I'll give you an in-depth explanation for the title "Secrets of Starlit Hearts", so you can understand it.
Fantasy · AnnGuslavia
ohhhhh? so you're editing and posting?
As book 1 is already complete, I'll give you an in-depth explanation for the title "Secrets of Starlit Hearts", so you can understand it.
Fantasy · AnnGuslavia
ooooh I love it
Book 1 · Secrets of Starlit Hearts
Fantasy · AnnGuslavia
I came as fast as I saw it was from you, omg, love your writing. I'll comment as much as possible! Do you have a stockpile for this one already?
Kate is def up to something bad prob contacting the Meredithian Empire, WHERE SHE IS FROM FS
I absolutely hate your point, especially because it makes sense. I can definitely see Natasha's lack of will to live at the end being a foreshadowing that she'll only stay alive if Valerian dies, and that Valerian will only survive if Natasha dies
Ann is prob withholding Kate's pov because she's EVIL af. I'm sure she didn't die in the 1st timeline, ain't no way, she probably faked it when she saw that Dalilah was manipulating Natasha more than she possibly could. I think Kate remaining in the Caspien Empire and infiltrated in the north, as I also believe she's the Princess from Meredithian, will probably mean that the war this time will be between the Meredithian and the Caspien Empire, and she'll be one of the cataclysms for it 😮💨
i totally see this happening
I don't matter in the end, I just need to save Valerian and father, those I care for, and to take down Dalilah and her little vile group. If the Goddess allows it, I'll kill that General too. But for that, I need some extreme training.
Fantasy · AnnGuslavia
you're an angel. that would be amazing, please, tell me when you post all the extra elements and I'll come back.
As book 1 is already complete, I'll give you an in-depth explanation for the title "Secrets of Starlit Hearts", so you can understand it.
Twilight of Zodiac
Fantasy · AnnGuslavia