It's interesting because, while I personally like my story, I actually don't really like my first chapter. But as I was saying, I need to fill a few hundred chapters, so please give me your advice.
After an unresolved incident that granted every single person a unique ability, the world got divided into many different guilds and their respective territories.
One day, young Locus returns to his village, only to find it has seemingly been destroyed by the Mastermind Guild.
In his search for revenge against the guild, he stumbles across a curious and odd man who offers him the strength he so desperately searched for.
On his journey, Locus learns more about the world he lives in, the people who control it, and what truly happened on the faithful day that everyone came into possession of their powers...
It's interesting because, while I personally like my story, I actually don't really like my first chapter. But as I was saying, I need to fill a few hundred chapters, so please give me your advice.
Mastermind: A Story You Won't Believe
Fantasy · MdM002