Also, there isn't any plot armour. Every battle the MC has fought was done with logic. I endeavour to explain how he wins after most of the battles, so no one would think it's plot armour. But I'll take the advice of building more tension. In later chapters, there's a bit more focus on other characters, but I try not to overdo it cause some readers don't seem to like that. Finally, there's quite a lot of divergence in story and actually less cliche lines. But I will work better to ensure that such a misunderstanding doesn't occur.
I'll duly take notes .Thank you for the advice 🙇🏻♂️
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"Capitalism at its finest."
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Maximillus Oder might be a genius, but Lucas had seen even more absurd geniuses. A college degree at 18? He has seen someone swallow a star at 12. A college degree at 18 doesn't sound as cool again when compared to that.
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okay, this is a nice GIF 😂
"Asta la vista, or something." [2] Lucas pulled the trigger and fired the rocket.
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Thanks for reading~
I actually got the idea from a typo 😭😂 But then again, the best ideas are sometimes from mistakes.
Eretre was a planet in the hyuman occupied solar system, Kellan, and was one of eight planets.
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"Host is also lacking in a bunch of places."
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Too soon to judge 😭😭
Chapter 1: Dead Again
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😅 Well, at face value, it looks that way, but this chapter was actually meant to have a deeper meaning. You could even say it's a spoiler.
Birth Of The Crafts-God
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