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Ancient Chinese Mythology
"Beep, congratulations to the master for his great luck. He drew Qiongqi, one of the four evil beasts."
One Piece: The Strongest Creation System
Anime & Comics · Agan_Rolling
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original One Piece: The Strongest Creation System
Ye Meng accidentally traveled to a world similar to One Piece, and he found himself to be Nami's brother. In this new world full of adventure and danger, Ye Meng awakened the strongest creation system, which can summon powerful characters from his previous life. He summoned legendary characters such as Esdeath, Uchiha Madara, Saitama, Aizen, Tushan Honghong, etc. However, the arrival of these characters caused chaos in the world. The collision of different forces and the conflict of ideas made the world more complicated. The world of One Piece became more chaotic because of Ye Meng.50 Chs 312 收藏
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System: I can pick up attributes
Jiang Yu traveled through time. This is a world after a catastrophe. Humans, strange beasts, alien civilizations, Jiang Yu who traveled through time found that he could pick up the attributes, skills, martial arts, and abilities dropped by others. So Jiang Yu was excited. The long road of picking up attributes began. [Congratulations to the master for picking up the strength attribute, strength +100000. ] [Congratulations to the master for picking up the mental power attribute, mental power +1000, becoming a mentalist. ] [Congratulations to the master for picking up the law fragment x1, and obtaining three thousand laws! ] Tianjiao: Am I not a Tianjiao? Why can't I even catch his knife? School beauty: Jiang Yu, do you think I still have a chance?80 Chs 70 收藏
You can understand it as something very powerful
"Beep, although the master's fruit is the fruit of the avenue, it only has one origin, and it lacks the power of three thousand avenues. Moreover, the stronger the world the master eats this fruit, the stronger the effect it will produce."
One Piece: The Strongest Creation System
Anime & Comics · Agan_Rolling