Aleph_Nul

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I don't like sand.

2024-04-25 加入 Global
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Aleph_Nul
Aleph_Nul
2 days ago
Commented

He sounds like me, and every man in the world. This 'fantasy' novel is getting too realistic for me.

"Well, I suppose it's a good thing I'm not a romantic, but a pragmatist." He glanced at her with a smirk. "Any girl who falls for me is bound to be disappointed."

My Living Shadow System Devours To Make Me Stronger

My Living Shadow System Devours To Make Me Stronger

Fantasy · renegadex

Aleph_Nul
Aleph_Nul
2 days ago
Commented

So you're saying Damon × Xander would be possible? That explains a lot of the story.

"I highly doubt that. Evangeline is the farthest thing from having a crush on me."

My Living Shadow System Devours To Make Me Stronger

My Living Shadow System Devours To Make Me Stronger

Fantasy · renegadex

Aleph_Nul
Aleph_Nul
2 days ago
Commented

'Oh, I see now...' ~A guy wearing a blindfold

Aleph_Nul
Aleph_Nul
3 days ago
Commented

Why does Damon sound and act like a sith lord?

Aleph_Nul
Aleph_Nul
5 days ago
Replied to Aleph_Nul

edit: nevermind about Leona, I don't think she's smart enough. Instead, it could be Renata (IDK why, just guessing)

"Which means someone got past my shadow perception… and I'm dealing with someone who knows about my crimes."

My Living Shadow System Devours To Make Me Stronger

My Living Shadow System Devours To Make Me Stronger

Fantasy · renegadex

Aleph_Nul
Aleph_Nul
5 days ago
Commented

I'm calling it now: the helper is either that information broker from town (I forgot his name) who pretends to be weak, or Damon's "bestie".

"Which means someone got past my shadow perception… and I'm dealing with someone who knows about my crimes."

My Living Shadow System Devours To Make Me Stronger

My Living Shadow System Devours To Make Me Stronger

Fantasy · renegadex

Aleph_Nul
Aleph_Nul
5 days ago
Commented

With the way he burns his calories every night with 15+ women each getting +2 hours worth of 'wrestling', it's surpising he isn't scrawny, or dehydrated. Does he even have enough 'DNA' to impregnate all of them? As for his 'little dragon', getting his 't-rex orally cleaned' by Luce/Demetra with razor sharp teeth (actual shark teeth), it's a miracle he didn't turn into a eunich.

Ten minutes later, the cooks brought over a few trolleys full of even more food; this made the girls laugh as Teuila commented, ''You're greedy Arch; I'm surprised you're not fat.''

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

Aleph_Nul
Aleph_Nul
6 days ago
Commented

Great Archer! You just woke up and the first thing you do is shatter all of your kingdoms glassware. That's gonna hurt your wallet.

Suddenly sensing the Swarm approaching from Plouria, Archer unleashed a deafening roar that shattered windows for miles. He flapped his gigantic wings, causing a small storm below him before taking off.

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

Aleph_Nul
Aleph_Nul
6 days ago
Commented

How is corruption even possible if they took an oath to Archer, their king? They swore to not betray the kingdom with a mana oath. It's always the first thing Archer demands before they can join his country. So, they physically couldn't, or die if they would, right?

'Corruption! People are stealing from the kingdom,' Aisha internally thought but didn't let it show on her face.

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

Aleph_Nul
Aleph_Nul
6 days ago
Commented

Sorry author, but I have to nitpick on this: Why are you describing her measurements in both Metric AND Imperial units (meters and feet)? It hurts my soul.

Hecate was ten meters long and five feet tall. Her wings destroyed branches, and her tree trunk-sized legs squashed many Wild Humans before her long tail took out many trees and enemies with one swipe.

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

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