Honestly, I'm not a review type of person. In fact, I don't even comment much, but I've read thirty chapters so far I'm just confused by the lack of traction.
It starts of slow and relaxed in the first few chapters, with hints of battles and honestly, I thought that's how it's gonna be, but by the thirtieth chapter, all I can say is that the wait was damn worth it. Three battles back-to-back and damn, none of them missed. But these cliffhangers man...
Anyways, as for the review. Well, I don't usually do these things, I think I said that before. But aight, well, I've read much more than the one hundred and forty-five books my profile says I've read, and honestly, from a slightly experienced reader's standpoint, the quality of writing in this book is above-average, I can give the author that much.
Since the first two chapters, it's always been two chapters a day. There were also a couple days that had four chaps published which was more than appreciated.
Simply saying that the story is developed well might be downplaying it, but yeah, it's been developing well. As for character design, Seth is so far, the most intriguing character, but though we can view the protagonist's thoughts, Anon, he still remains the most complex out of the characters revealed.
The secondary characters are more than just fleshed-out. They almost seem as individuals within another world. This's the best way to describe it, the author is showing us a world, and we're viewing this world. Like any other world, there're individuals within it. Obviously, the characters feel like genuine individuals when the author is taking this approach.
As for the world background, after stepping into this expecting some type of post-apocalyptic world of ruins, I was quite surprised by what I had stumbled across, but then again, with how hyped up "that man" is, I guess it's to be expected. But there's that underlying tone that the current society might be even darker than it is... well, it could just be me digging too much into it.
And that's that. All I can ask is for Mr. Author to take his/her time and complete this.
Honestly, I'm not a review type of person. In fact, I don't even comment much, but I've read thirty chapters so far I'm just confused by the lack of traction. It starts of slow and relaxed in the first few chapters, with hints of battles and honestly, I thought that's how it's gonna be, but by the thirtieth chapter, all I can say is that the wait was damn worth it. Three battles back-to-back and damn, none of them missed. But these cliffhangers man... Anyways, as for the review. Well, I don't usually do these things, I think I said that before. But aight, well, I've read much more than the one hundred and forty-five books my profile says I've read, and honestly, from a slightly experienced reader's standpoint, the quality of writing in this book is above-average, I can give the author that much. Since the first two chapters, it's always been two chapters a day. There were also a couple days that had four chaps published which was more than appreciated. Simply saying that the story is developed well might be downplaying it, but yeah, it's been developing well. As for character design, Seth is so far, the most intriguing character, but though we can view the protagonist's thoughts, Anon, he still remains the most complex out of the characters revealed. The secondary characters are more than just fleshed-out. They almost seem as individuals within another world. This's the best way to describe it, the author is showing us a world, and we're viewing this world. Like any other world, there're individuals within it. Obviously, the characters feel like genuine individuals when the author is taking this approach. As for the world background, after stepping into this expecting some type of post-apocalyptic world of ruins, I was quite surprised by what I had stumbled across, but then again, with how hyped up "that man" is, I guess it's to be expected. But there's that underlying tone that the current society might be even darker than it is... well, it could just be me digging too much into it. And that's that. All I can ask is for Mr. Author to take his/her time and complete this.
Myriad Devils
Fantasy · Six3