KewinSD

First of all, I don't speak English very well, so this might have some mistakes. Now, I really like the book and its story, but it seems like there are many subplots that are left unfinished, like what happened with the princess and the ruin. I understand that you want everything to come together and connect in the end, but it might help to resolve some of the issues you've introduced so it would be easier to follow. That's just my opinion. Thank you for writing the book; I really like it.

First, I'm sorry if my English is not good, it's the translator's. I want to say that I liked the continuous story like this