It is a bad habit of mines. I won’t lie.
She looked around her small prison. she couldn't find anyone around. She even stumble to peek out the doors barred window. still, nobody was around.
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A fair assessment.
That will be further elaborated in a future chapter.
"H-hey wait. You don't have to hold me. I can follow just fine!" Kalika shouted.
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I'll try to better catch and fix these better in the future. Thank you.
The gesture is appreciated but that won’t be too necessary since I’ll be ironing these out. I just found myself with less time this week is all. But if you do see some grammatical errors. Do feel free to point those out. I know that they do take away from the experience of reading at times. :)
I Do have an "X" Account of the same name. its the same with a couple other platforms
Hey All. Author here. If you have any constructive Criticism about the story so far. I would love to hear it. I still wish to improve a lot on writing . also any question feel free to sound off. I'll try to answer those as best as I can in this very earlier stage of the story thus far. Welp. back to writing I go!
You ask all the good questions my friend. : )
thank you.
I’ll make sure to polish it when I get a chance then. Thanks!
I had the Saintess Executed, now she’s the Demon Queen and I’m her Toy
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