Yes, Miracle Invoker.
There had been a problem with his transmission. Bruce got to know of it during his abandoned village exploration. He was capable of using Wish, not Wish Upon a Star. But Wish was a skill of Cthulhu, which he could use in his final Avatar.
The Overlord of Mysteries
Anime & Comics · ChaoticVoid_24
I would have uploaded a chapter or two by now, as it has been a while since my last chapter. It's just that I had an issue with my mobile, which I use to type the chapters. I got what all mobile, or more specifically AMOLED mobile, users fear: a green line issue after a software update. I updated the software of my mobile in the evening, and by night, I had a green line on it. Though it wasn't permanent, it had its moments. It would visit me, increasing my heartbeat, and would suddenly disappear, giving me a moment of relief. The company did provide free screen replacement for this issue, but from the reviews I read, there is a lack of service centers here in India—at least those that repair mobiles and are not just help desks. From the reviews, I found that it usually took them a month to get their hands on their mobile after submitting it at the center. Despite the replacement, many have still faced similar issues. So, after contemplating all these problems, and considering it has been close to 1 year and 10 months since my mobile purchase, I decided to exchange my phone for a new one. Now, I have my hands on a new phone. It is a compact phone, unlike my previous giant phone. Though that phone was quite thin and lightweight, this compact phone is not very typing-friendly. I am trying to get used to the small screen and struggling to type. Don't worry; I will try to upload the next chapter in a couple of days, and I will make sure to make it worth the wait. Anyway, enough of my sad story, thanks for your review. I am happy that you found this fic to your liking. So much that you have read it twice. Thanks a lot and I will try my best to upload the next chapter. For my desktop, I don't really like typing on it, I usually prefer to type while laying down or while walking around in my room. Which is sort of impossible on either my laptop or my old pc. So, the responses you may have read during this gap, was done through my laptop.
Shinigami Momonga
Supreme One, Momonga! (Volume 1)
Fantasy · Soul_River
Her impersonation of Domitor and Bruce find out about it in the end. They didn't have a chance to communicate after it, as Bruce was whisked away to Fate Verse.
However, there was one exception—Terror Blade. His loyalty, once unshakeable, had walked the razor's edge between devotion to the Fool and the Root. And now, as Alice observed the subtle tension simmering between him and the other Guardians, it was clear that old wounds hadn't yet healed.
The Overlord of Mysteries
Anime & Comics · ChaoticVoid_24
I'm not saying that your fic has any problem per se; It's just that I don't have much interest in Naruto Fanfics. Naruto was good, but it's just the world setting. It doesn't interest me much. I was reading your Fanfic, just because of Gilgamesh. Moreover, I just can't imagine him, the Grown Version of him, who has experienced everything he has. Even if he did reincarnate and lost his memories in the process, I just can't imagine him running with his hands stretched back. Moreover, he is wearing Ninja clothes and sandals and is calling their style of living as cool. That doesn't sit well with me, not with his attitude, style and pride. Had it been a reincarnated person with Gilgamesh's prowess, it would have been fine. Even the kid Gilgamesh might have been good, but the personality difference is too much. Even for the kid version of Gilgamesh, even after regaining his memories step by step. Where is the Mongrel part? Plus the training session he had with Kakashi and Yamada was a replica of Naruto. The one he had in Shippuuden. If I am right, Yamada hadn't left Root, at this point in time. And he wasn't even Yamada when Naruto was a kid. Overall verdict: I am not interested in Naruto Fanfics, which compelled me to drop it, plus the above part. What you are doing is good. The story is great. Pacing isn't much of an issue but there isn't much progression to the plot with every chapter during the training arc. As for Grammar. I am not your guy to examine the story for grammar. As English isn't my first language. It's a bit lacking, though. I am not sure what it is, but I just have this feeling or hunch you could say. It's a fast paced fic, though, in my opinion. You have dragged the scenes which doesn't interest people much, those boring scenes that we wish to get over with and have sprinted through the interesting scenes. That which would interest the readers. Anyway, all the best for the Fic. I'll give it a try later if I gain an interest in this theme.
"You need to get your explosive chakra under control. One of the basics of being a ninja is stealth. You being flashy and exposing your location with your chakra will only bring more harm than good. What I am saying is, you need to get control now or suffer the consequences later. Lucky for you, you have time. Come let's go help Yamato." Kakashi said as he and Gilgamesh ran towards Yamato who was reapplying the barrier seal and adding more chakra than ever to reinforce it.
Gilgamesh Reborn In Naruto
Anime & Comics · Heavenly_Enel
Has made his return in the next chapter. It happens at the end of the chapter.
I have dropped it. It just wasn't to my taste.
"You need to get your explosive chakra under control. One of the basics of being a ninja is stealth. You being flashy and exposing your location with your chakra will only bring more harm than good. What I am saying is, you need to get control now or suffer the consequences later. Lucky for you, you have time. Come let's go help Yamato." Kakashi said as he and Gilgamesh ran towards Yamato who was reapplying the barrier seal and adding more chakra than ever to reinforce it.
Gilgamesh Reborn In Naruto
Anime & Comics · Heavenly_Enel
What about this chapter compared to the previous chapters of this Volume? I have re-read this chapter to check for your pointers to improve the next chapter. Also, can you comment on the part where you thought that it was not needed?
Drop a comment and leave a review. Be it negative or positive but make sure to give constructive criticism. Also if you think you can add anything of value to the fic, then you are more than welcome to comment. Any thoughts or questions, ask them in the comment section. I'll try to answer them as soon as I can.
The Overlord of Mysteries
Anime & Comics · ChaoticVoid_24
Could have been possible.
'So, we understand their language,' she mused, amusement flickering through her thoughts. 'How convenient. S once mentioned a fan theory—players or guilds transported to the New World had used a World Item, possibly Ouroboros or the Five Elements of Overcoming to solve the issues. If the theory holds some truth...' She mused silently, resting her chin lightly against her knuckles.
The Overlord of Mysteries
Anime & Comics · ChaoticVoid_24
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original The Overlord of Mysteries
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An Overlord - Multiverse Travel Fanfiction The protagonist, Mc, was betrayed by the world and his expectations, which led to his death. After meeting a being called ROB, Mc played a game with him to obtain cheat abilities. ROB then transported Mc to a world, from where he would get isekai'd to another world - Overlord. Mc is a dreamer who can be both kind and cold when necessary. He follows Machiavelli and Chanakya and is a fan of horror and Lord of the Mysteries. The story will begin with Mc having no powers related to Lord of the Mysteries, but he will try to build his guild based on LOTM themes. His NPCs will mainly be from Fate, LOTM, and other popular fiction works. Mc's in-game character's powers and events could be inspired by other Overlord fan fiction. Word Count Every Chapter: On Average around 3k to 7.5k. Note: This is an AU Overlord world. The AU part is Mc reincarnating as Bruce Wayne in Gotham of 22nd century of Earth in Overlord verse. The first volume is for Character development and doesn't affect much of your reading experience if you decide to skip it. The first volume is Batman Vs Joker, so you can skip it. If it's not to your taste. Batman[MC] and Joker are the only DC characters in this fic. The Batman arc will be over with the first volume. The second Volume is purely a Yggdrasil Game experience. There isn't much real-life experience shared in the second volume. 22nd-century Earth is a normal world with no magic or supernatural elements. Everything is the same as the original Overlord world. Except for there being Gotham in America and Bruce Wayne in it. Even the Joker is not the same as the comic version, at least his back story. You can skip from the fourth chapter of the First Volume to not miss out on the development of his wishes and the main base of the story. I'm the author of this fanfiction. As English is not my first language, constructive feedback is welcome. I'm a college student, so the upload schedule will be irregular, but I will strive to upload at least one chapter per week. I'm not asking for power stones, but I do appreciate comments and reviews, which may lead to more frequent uploads. The choice is yours, whether you decide to give power stones or not is fine. It is your choice. If you do decide to give, I appreciate it. I aim to upload four chapters per month. Note: Mc has Gilgamesh and Satoru Gojo's template. The image used in this fic as the cover image belongs to their respectful owner. Disclaimer: This is a work of fan fiction based on multiple existing anime/manga series/TV Shows/Movies/Comics. The characters and settings used in this story belong to their respective owners and creators, and no copyright infringement is intended. This story is purely for entertainment purposes and is not intended to infringe upon any existing intellectual property. I do not own any of the original works that inspired this fanfiction, and I fully support the original creators and their works. The image used for the cover or others does not belong to me. If you are the rightful owner of the image in question and would like to request its removal, please do not hesitate to contact me. It is my utmost priority to respect the intellectual property rights of others and I will ensure that the image is taken down expeditiously upon receipt of your request. References: [1] Overlord - Kugane Maruyama [2] Lord of the Mysteries - Cuttlefish That Loves Diving [3] Fate Series - Nasuverse [4] JJK - Gege Akutami [5] DC [6] Star Wars - George Lucas [7] Marvel [8] Anime53 Chs 2.5k 收藏
He did in fact pay them for the extra levels.
The Overlord of Mysteries
Anime & Comics · ChaoticVoid_24