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So, if you are still reading this fic, please just comment, even a simple 'hi' would suffice.
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Eva felt her body float, as if she could see... everything.
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idk what they want, I got another one just after this one, which starts in January. Like WHY?
Exams again TvT
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You're worse than me! xD
He then moved to the males' group, pulling out the people he saw strong and putting them into a separate group.
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I understand what you mean. While re-reading the earlier chapters, it's clear where I went wrong. As for world-building, I'm still learning how to do that xD. I've learnt a lot as I progressed in chapters, though. In any case, I'll probably rewrite those chapters when I get time. Thanks a lot for your review, and I hope you continue enjoying the story :3
"I'm sorry, Lucas," I muttered as blood gushed out from these lines.
Anime & Comics · ImaMelonFarm
I see what you mean. What I was trying to do was to show that our MC cares about no one but a few people, a twisted sense of love, one might call it. However, it seems that the way I presented it was... bad. Well, all I can do now is try to fix it when I rewrite the chapters, and I'll try my best for that. In any case, thanks a lot for reading up till here and giving me your honest thoughts :3
Our poor bro's wife who was pulled outta their wedding xd
His eyes darted around. Where was he? Where was Dina?
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Thanks a bunch :3 I hope you keep enjoying it ⸜(˃ ᵕ ˂ )⸝
In the Academy as Sukuna
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