Is he drinking? Is he smoking? WTH is going on? This story suddenly feels like a mess after the first few chapters.
Max smirked, drinking in silence, wondering if his actions were as foolish as they seemed.
TV · SrCuervo
It seems you've copied this scene word to word from your other book.
"Never finish something when you know damn well you have another enemy still in the area, stupid kid." Jean stepped out from the corner of a hallway and, after seeing the corpses, showed a look of disgust. "This is a fucking disaster; good thing I came prepared."
TV · SrCuervo
Don't tell me he's preparing for a Zombie apocalypse as well.
These were the small luxuries he could afford with the credit card his uncle had prepared for him, so he bought some chocolate boxes, 90% cocoa, lots of ice cream, nuts, and, of course, chips.
TV · SrCuervo
It's his hold family's house.
"Nice to meet you; I'm Daniel LaRusso. It seems we'll be neighbors."
TV · SrCuervo
If possible, don't take love interest advice from the readers(They are horny Bastards—Bonk!) I want to see the female characters fight for him, it's a Fighting story, after all.
I hope this is your normal pace, otherwise you'll burnout pretty quickly. Fortunately, you haven't reached the cannon point yet, so you won't be lacking ideas at least.
Making them invisible takes the fun out, man. I mean, they are constructs of cursed energy, so let them be visible.
If anyone were to look in my direction, they would see someone soaring through the air in a seated position without assistance.
Anime & Comics · GAF_00_TW
Is he retarded?
"Yes. It's true, it would be straightforward to rob them. Don't worry. I have the video to defend myself," Luke whispered with a slight smile. Enid's cheeks flushed as she remembered the video Luke showed her.
TV · Nathe07
Ugh🤢🤮 Give better example, who the Fuck likes a Kardashian?
"Yeah, no one could convince me to date someone in a hundred years... even if she were a Kardashian."
Anime & Comics · Livice
Could've saved her, you know? It would've helped my anxiety after that episode.
The images were of a middle-aged black-haired woman being punched, cut up, and kicked by two men in suits. The pictures scrolled one after another, each one showing the woman in a worse state than before. The last photo, a selfie of Takakura making a peace sign with the dead woman in the background, could be seen on the phone. Causing the man to chuckle in amusement.
In My Hero Academia with a Jujutsu Kaisen Gacha System
Anime & Comics · GAF_00_TW