Criticism and help is always welcomed . as an inexperienced author .
The World building can do some work but pretty good
Hello everyone this is my first work ideas and criticism are always welcome and thank you for reading
Some defence on the 3rd so you need to know . So the first point is the fact that the 3rd is not a bad hokage and the fact that he lead Konoha through 2 great shinobi war specks volumes of how good of a leader he was other than that Konoha wasn't the only village that was weak at that point because the 3rd great war which was the most bloody war in history of Naruto it was also the longest war so at this point every village is at its weakest point . After this war has ended the new hokage or the 4th dies so the 3rd had to step in again to build Konoha when Konoha was at its weakest point so raiseing a child wasn't exactly the first thing on his mind . And why are you not saying anything about Jeriya not being there for Naruto he was literally his Godfather who's role if don't know is to raise the child if something happens the parents
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