Hevenly_Sword

Hevenly_Sword

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Hevenly_Sword
6 months ago
Replied to Daoistpwd2z5

would e-mail work

Hevenly_Sword
Hevenly_Sword
6 months ago
Replied to Daoistpwd2z5

Criticism and help is always welcomed . as an inexperienced author .

Hevenly_Sword
Hevenly_Sword
8 months ago
Posted

The World building can do some work but pretty good

Hevenly_Sword
Hevenly_Sword
8 months ago
Posted

Hello everyone this is my first work ideas and criticism are always welcome and thank you for reading

Hevenly_Sword
Hevenly_Sword
1 years ago
Replied to Ashinydecapod

Some defence on the 3rd so you need to know . So the first point is the fact that the 3rd is not a bad hokage and the fact that he lead Konoha through 2 great shinobi war specks volumes of how good of a leader he was other than that Konoha wasn't the only village that was weak at that point because the 3rd great war which was the most bloody war in history of Naruto it was also the longest war so at this point every village is at its weakest point . After this war has ended the new hokage or the 4th dies so the 3rd had to step in again to build Konoha when Konoha was at its weakest point so raiseing a child wasn't exactly the first thing on his mind . And why are you not saying anything about Jeriya not being there for Naruto he was literally his Godfather who's role if don't know is to raise the child if something happens the parents

  • I Became a Student at the Transcension Academy original

    I Became a Student at the Transcension Academy

    Action ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG CULTIVATION GENIUS HISTORICAL ACADEMY RIGHTEOUS

    Seo-Joon, who had been working to save money in order to pay off his dead parents’ debt and attend a hunter academy, ended up needing to spend all his savings on a surgery due to an unfortunate accident. In his moment of despair, a weird advertisement played. [You can also become an awakener!] He decided to register since he had nothing else to lose. [Mr. Kim Seo-Joon, welcome to Transcension Academy.] This hunter academy is on a completely different ‘dimension’ than the rest! In the age of private hunter education, you can also become a ‘transcender.’

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