Theguard

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2023-11-30 加入 Global
徽章 6

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24 days ago
Commented

Tftc what’s your update schedule going to be?

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1 months ago
Posted

The grammar especially around names of people and places is terrible, the story seems like it has direction but it ends up just jumping around without any meaning. Overall I tried to give the story credit but with each chapter find it harder and harder to continue to read. The story line itself and grammar are my biggest complaints.

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1 months ago
Replied to Don_Diegow

I Disagree greatly with this review.

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1 months ago
Commented

Staromest?

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1 months ago
Commented

Page

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1 months ago
Commented

Why would there be a feast in a dungeon ?

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