Thanks for the review.This was my first time writing a bit serious story with too many characters or things so I might made a mistake. I will try to improve.
First thing. The top one doesn't care about the bottom. Second, since it's God dominated world with lot of church.Healing is easy with money.any cut part can be stitched. If you read further you get the feel. Cutting organs is a minor thing and can be treated easily with spells.Higher priest can even regenerate organs but not the head
The blade sliced through both of the man's legs.
Fantasy · Lonelythree
No ntr or yuri.
It is...But this one isn't morally right. He kills anyone who pisses him off. Unlike Kael, he doesn't have justice drama. Also, do you like the story? Any feedback? Also, can you give a review
Thanks, buddy. I liked your review. I haven't read Hunter Academy but many commented on it so I read it and yeah, it was a coincidence but the character style overlaps with it. Also about the fourth wall breaking. I made a very big mistake by writing in the first POV. It isn't my cup of tea but I wanted to try it inspired by Entrail books. And with ongoing books switching from TPOV and FPOV is a hassle. As for other things, it was also true. Quite a helpful review.
If you look carefully she is just a spoiled brat whom isn't even level to be called Kael's enemy but someone around her is..
She wanted to crush something.If possible, she wanted to send an executioner right this second to butcher that pathetic brother of hers.
Fantasy · Lonelythree
It's a wraith
He waiting for more development.Like this guy is real Walter or not.You see the bodies are already under going analysis. It won't be dragged much.I have already finished Tycoon in the draft already.Around more 10 chaps to go
I have already finished Tycoon in the draft. It will be finished this month. The Huntsman of Death and This one will continue side by side. As for the Protagonist, it's dropped because lack of earnings. It is a shared universe so the sequel will carry from it.
He did
Kael walked through the narrow hallway leaving behind a bloody trail as the axe in his hand left behind drops of blood splattering and spilling across the floor.
The Grand Duke's Son Is A Heretic
Fantasy · Lonelythree