A grown man calling a stranger grandpa is weird asl. Might as well have started the story with a regular person born of the magic world instead of another
"I need to get rid of them quickly and then look for Father… I guess I should tell Grandpa to buy some spiritual potions to increase my movement speed," Rain thought while looking around. "Perhaps I also should focus on leveling up the skills that increase my movement speed… even though they will consume my stamina faster."
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
He has no goal or greater purpose. I feel like I’m reading the story of a bum.
Rain couldn't help but feel frustrated. He had hoped to uncover some evidence that would help him understand the monsters' behavior and protect his family and the village. But it seemed that they had left no trace behind, even in the area where he faced them. Giving up on that was impossible, but it sure was troublesome when he had other things in his mind like his Father's whereabouts. Once again, he was reminded that his life won't be easy in that world.
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
Must’ve been lonely asl in previous life to be this obsessed with a father figure. Plus you are already grown you shouldn’t need another man to guide you in life. This MC is garbage Barbie girl
While his duty to protect the village kept him occupied, Rain's thoughts often wandered to his father. He wanted to search for him, to reunite with his family, but he couldn't ignore the imminent threat that lingered in the village. It was a difficult decision to make, choosing between his personal desires and the safety of those around him.
Infinite Paths: The Raging Phoenix
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99