The pacing is great, and the character explainations are very well done, although it may need a bit of development in explaining the scenes, but thats just me, Overall a solid Read and has alot of potential! looking forward to more!
Extremely Underrated!! The writing style is awesome and not to mention the emphasis on character's appearances, especially zero, it was as if he was standing right infront of me, masterful writing, huge potential and definitely worth a read🔥🔥
Aldric seems like such a nice guy!!!
Wow! I'm completely stunned by quality! its insane!! The attention to details is just awesome, the way you explain each and every detail, from the clothing of a character to their mental beliefs, I just absolutely loved that, especially the details in the character of Holden, the way you discribed everything about him, his insecurities, his weaknesses, his strong points, everything was amazing, I also loved the way how you handled the dialogues, each dialogue had a deep relation to their respective character, exploring the personality of the character as well as their mannerisms, the masterful writing really do deserve praise!!Overall the Series have crazy potential, the concept and your dedication to it, will definitely show great results, you better keep the chapters's coming!! Im eagerly waiting for more!Read it folks! Highly recommended, you are missing out if you ignore it!!
Appreciate it Brother!! Stay tunned🔥
Thanks Alot🔥🔥
The Timeline shift in each chapter is soo Captivating! I absolutely love the stories, having this type of style, not to mention the fact that, it greatly helps in world building. Also i'd have to admit, Romance like this really isn't my type, but this might be able to change that! I'm really excited for the future chapters and my eyes are craving for Damian and Ophelia's interactions!Overall the series is highly recommended, be sure to give it a read!
Come on Zero! You got this!!
I have high expectations from this!! looking forward tp future!!
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Grief of the Endless
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