Kulas_Pelimco

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5 days ago
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I think yes on the selem one and the final boss is the brothers of light and first I think you should add more text 😉 and I think the reaction on the girls needs a little more depth but it's fine for now . but all in all it fine but think it needs more words written

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Kulas_Pelimco
8 days ago
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think we should start small no or maybe go big re overlord but re zero it's a good start

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9 days ago
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ok the this is what I think as a reader on the world I choose 1 and 3 but I prefer 3 cuz he can get other things in books anime, cartoon and stuff and i think it will help him develop more faster and the plot plot I chose 1 and 2 but I prefer 2 because he has more things there developing and many more benefits I think but if you think about can you put 1 and 2 no?

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13 days ago
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elden ring? we eating good

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23 days ago
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nice i like this amd this the first time i saw a fic that is league of legends hope to see it go on