I could only find theories on what the "Hiten" does and most of it was related to the sky, so I'll be writing abilities based on that while throwing in a few things that I thought would be nifty.
There won't be a yandere thing going on if that's what you mean, though I'll have a pov of her perspective on the whole love scenario. And though I don't like spoiling how I'm going to write future chapters I'll say that I'm writing with happiness.
"I won't stop loving you, even if it kills me!" she yelled. "Until that day comes, I'll keep chasing after you, until you feel the same!"
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I mean... Other than suggesting that you should give Cyberpunk Edgerunners a watch, I agree that character development of every character introduced could've been better.
I.. I don't really have anything to say that any of this is really wrong... I've known and "attempted" to fix problems this fic had that are now sort of biting me as I write Vol.2, namely the MC's psychological state. And for the powerscaling? I believe I stuffed it up from Chapter 5... Sad days. Thank you for reviewing and reading and I hope you read my other work one day.
Sorry for the late reply. While I won't spoil anything I will confirm that there will be no rejection.
"I won't stop loving you, even if it kills me!" she yelled. "Until that day comes, I'll keep chasing after you, until you feel the same!"
Life After Death: The Strength Of Suffering
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