DaoistZvlcCm

DaoistZvlcCm

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2023-08-25 加入 India
徽章 3

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DaoistZvlcCm
DaoistZvlcCm
2 days ago
Posted

EVERYTHING IS PERFECT EXCEPT POOR WRITING QUALITY

DaoistZvlcCm
DaoistZvlcCm
3 days ago
Replied to DaoistZvlcCm

but one thing, I want to add, I reread the novel and noticed some incorrect sentence formation please correct that.

DaoistZvlcCm
DaoistZvlcCm
4 days ago
Posted

THIS IS EPIC 🤣 I LOVE IT! PURE CHAOS 👍👍👍

DaoistZvlcCm
DaoistZvlcCm
4 days ago
Posted

too many grammatical errors. Hard to read

DaoistZvlcCm
DaoistZvlcCm
6 days ago
Commented

It's "Clear Sky"

DaoistZvlcCm
DaoistZvlcCm
6 days ago
Replied to Venerable_Adam

I like the story till now but you are spelling some terms incorrectly please correct that

DaoistZvlcCm
DaoistZvlcCm
9 days ago
Posted

I LIKE IT, THE LATEST UPDATES ARE GOOD WITH IMPROVED QUALITY. THEY ARE FUN TO READ. 👍HOPE YOU KEEP THE QUALITY SAME.

DaoistZvlcCm
DaoistZvlcCm
12 days ago
Posted

I LIKED THE STORY BUT YOU RUINED THE STORY DUE TO WRITING QUALITY. FOR ME STORY DEVELOPMENT AND EVERYTHING IS GREAT BUT THE WRITING QUALITY MAKES ME WANT TO DROP IT. I SUGGEST YOU SHOULD REUPLOAD THE NOVEL AFTER CORRECTING THE MISTAKES AND IMPROVING THE WRITING QUALITY. THEN AGAIN YOU CAN TAKE IT AS A GRAIN OF SALT. ALL THE BEST👍🏻

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DaoistZvlcCm
DaoistZvlcCm
1 months ago
Replied to Boss_Man_7326

Will there be a change in appearance in beerus or Will he look the same like og beerus