1st_Planewalker

1st_Planewalker

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1st_Planewalker
1 years ago
Replied to JohnnyReever

I understand that. I often read novels or fanfictions were the mc gets overpowered in the first 3 chapters and then just exploits that. He doesn't really struggle, which is a whole side of a character the reader can't connect through. Imagine I you don't know what he would do in desperate times. I try to keep my mc as real as possible, but feel free to stop me if I should go to far. This goes for all readers of course.

My family back on earth didn't spent much time with me. That is a big reason why I didn't have a problem to go to MIT and research on holidays. I still had weekends with friends sometimes, but I wouldn't call my childhood a lovely one. I couldn't say why, but now I felt more appreciated than on earth.

Star Wars: Transmigrated through Time and Space

Star Wars: Transmigrated through Time and Space

Movies · 1st_Planewalker

1st_Planewalker
1st_Planewalker
1 years ago
Replied to JohnnyReever

Thank you very much. I will correct them in the coming week. Hope it hasn't influenced your joy while reading.

My family back on earth didn't spent much time with me. That is a big reason why I didn't have a problem to go to MIT and research on holidays. I still had weekends with friends sometimes, but I wouldn't call my childhood a lovely one. I couldn't say why, but now I felt more appreciated than on earth.

Star Wars: Transmigrated through Time and Space

Star Wars: Transmigrated through Time and Space

Movies · 1st_Planewalker

1st_Planewalker
1st_Planewalker
1 years ago
Replied to nunya_business_3493

Thanks

1st_Planewalker
1st_Planewalker
1 years ago
Replied to nunya_business_3493

Thanks

1st_Planewalker
1st_Planewalker
1 years ago
Replied to Feebling

My knowledge is based on the books, but I regularly check with the fanwiki and it said she graduated the June 1991, but Harry started in September. But as always I could be wrong, so if anybody has news on that, please answer our confusion.

I'm 7 years old, so I have 4 years till school starts.

HP: Magic Beasts and how to tame them

HP: Magic Beasts and how to tame them

Fantasy · 1st_Planewalker

1st_Planewalker
1st_Planewalker
1 years ago
Replied to Aeden_Emrys

Hey there,to answer some questions without spoiling anything, here a rundown to your questions.MC doesn't know yet which timeline he is in, but finds some clues in the next couple of chapters.He hasn't made his goals clear as he needs time to adjust, before knowing what he wants to do.He didn't had an opportunity of looking in a mirror right after coming out or in a workshop, but you'll find out soon.There will be a romantic interest, but it will take a few years, as he is only 12 now. Well at least his body is. Other things have a higher priority. Find it good your interested and hope for more questions or feedback.

1st_Planewalker
1st_Planewalker
1 years ago
Replied to Neongoldbrick

Yes, you are right. I simply made the choice so they could get the answer themselves. But in his view the stones features aren't valuable, yet something else is. And at least he says his answer would be a minority in front of the stone. But thanks, maybe I should have used a different phrasing.

"Well most people would say one thing, but every person has different opinions and on this topic I would say I would be in the 1% of a different answer. How about this: I give you a tip and you find your own opinion. Fair enough."

HP: Magic Beasts and how to tame them

HP: Magic Beasts and how to tame them

Fantasy · 1st_Planewalker

1st_Planewalker
1st_Planewalker
1 years ago
Replied to Zero616

Thanks for the feedback. I planned his lost drive for archeology to come back and a romance, but maybe I should make some changes to his thinking or different developments after encounters. Anyway, thanks for your honest feedback, it really helps.

1st_Planewalker
1st_Planewalker
1 years ago
Replied to Haris_Khan1994

Well for once, the mc wasn't that interested in the conflict and was more inclined to getting pets. And I'm sure he already used 'Shared Sense' a while back. If you're wondering: Is that all?; then you must continue to read. Hope I could answer your concerns.

1st_Planewalker
1st_Planewalker
1 years ago
Replied to Shuten

Yes you are right. But I get him there for future plot and used his recommendation by the guild employee as he is only a kid at the point. Hope you understand that I need to make some changes to integrate the mc into the world

"Not many.", she sighs. "I know one place and can ask another, but they may ask for a few hours of labor as they are restaurants who have rooms for employees."

Danmachi: Blessings of the Gods

Danmachi: Blessings of the Gods

Anime & Comics · 1st_Planewalker

  • Danmachi: Blessings of the Gods original

    Danmachi: Blessings of the Gods

    Anime & Comics ADVENTURE REINCARNATION WEAKTOSTRONG DANMACHI

    Alexandros was an archaeologist with special interest in mythology. After an accident at an excavation site, he meets an unknown god. He gets blessed with a Falna and thrown in the world of Danmachi. Will he adapt to his new life? How can he succed when he can't join a familia, because of his Falna? Does he reach the top or give up and find another purpose at his second chance at life?

    18 Chs 270 收藏

  • Star Wars: Transmigrated through Time and Space original

    Star Wars: Transmigrated through Time and Space

    Movies WEAKTOSTRONG TRANSMIGRATION STARWARS

    Mark was caught up in a turbulence in space and transmigrated to the universe of StarWars. The problem? He exited the stream of Space and Time at half his age. How does he survive in this world of war and betrayal with the knowledge of all. _____________________ #Grey MC

    8 Chs 207 收藏

  • HP: Magic Beasts and how to tame them original

    HP: Magic Beasts and how to tame them

    Fantasy REINCARNATION HARRYPOTTER BEAST TAMING

    Cancer is shit. So after Nicholas died, R.O.B. send him in the magical world of Harry Potter to live a new life. A few request later, he is on his way. To tame all magical beasts. Or that's what he would, if the plot wouldn't come in his way. _____________________________________________________ As you have seen in the title and synopsis, this is a HarryPotter fanfiction. I made a mistake when choosing the genre, because it was my first time and the Support couldn't help. The universe belongs to J.K.Rowling.

    43 Chs 400 收藏