Clover_White

I don't have a problem with that, but the way the author keeps nerfing sunny and elevating nephis makes it really bad.

Damn. Firstly nice review, secondly, i like how expansive your vocab is.

I doubt many will see this review because I made it two stars, however, here are my thoughts : I'm currently on chapter 1113. 1. Writing : The writing is good, the way the author writes makes it clear that his vocabulary is quite expansive and good. I like sometimes how complex his writing can get and sometimes how simple it can be. Even with simpler writing, he can convey his thoughts and emotions well. 2. Pacing : The pacing can be quite weird, sometimes it's fast, sometimes it drags a lot, and sometimes it's just natural. 3. Overnerfing : I don't know why but the author seems to nerf the MC after every arc, and horribly, the way it's going the MC just seems like a side character. Rather than feeling like an MC, he is just a side character. The character growth on the MC is nicely done though. 4. Overuse of the [Fated] Attribute : I don't think I have to explain myself too much on this point, the author uses this attribute too much, making the MC fall into horrible situations one after another. 5. Characters: The characters are written well, Nephis seems like a BUM, Cassie is alright, MC is MC, and Effie and Kai are okay. Other characters are decent. Lastly, while this novel is written well, in no way is this perfect or even a masterpiece. With how many trash web novels exist on the internet, this might seem like a gem, but among diamonds, this is nothing.