I'm pretty young and this is my first real long form story so I thought I'd post it for some criticism, I would be thrilled about comments no matter positive or negative just so I know how I can improve my writing. I'm still in school so it may take a bit for new chapters to drop but I'm working on it, promise. I hope that everyone that decided to read "Slaves of Fate" enjoys the story and since English is my not my first language I'm sorry if there are a few mistakes. Take care of yourself and have fun reading, I hope you will continue to follow my story, I have most of the story planned out on a story board already and trust me: it will get CRAZY ;)
2023-04-03 加入 Global
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Fantasy · ValestriaMoon