I chose super OP eggs so that I could pinpoint which pokemons I specifically wanted to be added into the story line rather than making up a bunch of filler chapters about how he coincidentally met a super OP pokemon like with the Metagrosses and even got their mega stone...even that was too much plot armor for me and I, as the author, cringed while writing it!
If you notice any inconsistencies, please, please, please do point them out so that I can flush out the story some more. I wrote the first couple chapters in advance and then stopped working on the novel for a bit so my memory of the earlier chapters is a bit fuzzy! I'm well into the chapter 100s now and as such, the little details from the earlier chapters might have flew past me...therefore, I would greatly appreciate any friendly reminders :D
Hello to the readers who have gotten this far! I released 10 chapters since we have passed 50 chapters and honestly, I'm getting bored of writing these filler chapters too. I want to get to the good stuff already and I'm sure you do too! But we can't have a blank world so a little more story building is in order...
Thank you for reading so far :D
No, as of right now, only Vioarr (Nidoking) has perfect EVs which boosted ALL of his star stats up by one star. :D I will most likely add an auxiliary chapter later on that will explain more about how pokemons can increase their star stats and grade potential to clear up the confusion.
Hi, everyone! Thanks for stopping by and checking out my first piece of work, Pokemon: Team Rocket's Uprising (PTRU)! Just to clarify some things, the first couple chapters will be slow. The characters won't be one dimensional and as the story progresses, so will they and that will reflect in how they think, act and talk. Jax starts off the story as a 5 years old child. Now, I don't remember how I was at that age but I do know 5 years old don't talk coherently so bear in mind that he will have baby talk...(excessive use of Mommy and Daddy). This will gradually disappear as he grows older and then will no longer be an issue as he grows up. The story starts off slow and to speed things along, I will be time skipping certain parts of it. That being said, once the action comes, it will get dark as I will be portraying Team Rocket as an EVIL organization. Not just two humans and a walking, talking cat chasing after one trainer around all of his adventures but a full-fledged, 'I want to dominate the world' organization. Thanks to all of the readers so far.
Is Team Rocket still just Jessie, James and Meowth? These are just the beginning chapters...like world building. His early childhood years are important but in the grand scheme of things I have planned, they won't be worth much. From what I think a global evil organization is capable of, once the story gets rolling and Team Rocket actually plays a more important role and show up in the story more, things are going to get dark...and fast.
Thanks for the feedback! :D This is my first novel and first time actually trying to write anything so any feedback is greatly appreciated. This is still only 28 chapters in and the characters will become more flushed out as the story progresses. As for the secret cave and how two seemingly helpless children were able to create it will be further discussed in later chapters. As for the hypocrisy, Jax is still only a child in this world. Even in his old world, he was a sickly child confined to a bed most of his life so from my perspective as the author, I figured he wouldn't have much life experiences. Yes, he will do certain actions that might not seem to fit his character but at age 5, does anyone really know what their character is? He's still discovering himself and I hope you, as the reader will stay long enough for him to as well. In my future chapters, I will try my best to flush him out and make sure his actions dont stray too far from what I have set in store for him.
Thanks for the input :D This is my first novel and I wanted to do something different. The beginning is a little slow but I have plans for the system that I hope the readers will enjoy.
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original Pokemon: Team Rocket's Uprising
Jax Skyborne only wanted one thing, to become the strongest pokemon trainer in the world. But when he's thrown into a world with Team Rocket on the rise, he bit more than he could chew. Join our protagonist on his adventure to become the best and save his world.100 Chs 565 收藏
Sorry, I've been a little busy with life but more chapters will be coming soon! I plan on uploading regularly every Friday with about 3-5 chapters :D
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