Good story, just really needs an editor. Lots of little mistakes, not unreadable just annoying.
Does the writing quality get better. Because every other sentence there’s a mistake.
On the bright side, he had prior experience with infantry where he had spent his carrier so far. With careful management, he could become a splendid and well-rounded ground forces commander – something that I currently lacked. There was a reason I did not want clones in overall command of any branch of the forces on my disposal. It was the same one I was pushing for the promotion of Pellaeon to commodore and my naval XO. I still did not know how good the control Sidious had over the Clones was. The various rumours I remembered from my universe were not something I could afford to take for granted.
[Star Wars] Rogue Knight
Others · DarkImmortal_Intel
I didn’t mean to delete my text but I still stand by it the word choice is just very subpar imo. It really takes the immersion out of it for me.
Beth knew that was not true. When Madeline had stepped on to the dance floor, her eyes had followed her sister to see who the man was who was dancing with her. And by the looks of it, she doubted her sister was lying.
The Crown's Obsession
Fantasy · ash_knight17
I gave this novel five stars because everyone in the comments keeps saying it’s amazing and I’m only on the mid twenties so I’ll trust them on that. However I have a major problem with this novel that is driving me crazy because no one mentions it. The word choice a lot of the time is just awful it either doesn’t make sense at all or lacks any sort of flow. I would highly recommend hiring an editor especially considering people seem to enjoy the novel. The writing quality is just very sub par.
A marriage alliance they’re peasants how is that a marriage alliance they have nothing to offer.
"It's just me. All alone, but once I marry your daughter we can start planning to have a family," Calhoun's words were firm, and he continued to speak, "Mr. Harris, I heard both of them have been getting marriage alliance. How come you didn't get them married? Most of them get married when they are sixteen? Especially considering the financial condition of the family," he placed the glass aside that still had wine and brought both his hands forward to interlink his fingers below his chin.
The Crown's Obsession
Fantasy · ash_knight17
That’s stupid why wouldn’t she do the same for Beth then that makes no sense
Mrs. Harris had a sister who had been first in line for marriage. Her parents had given her hand to a wealthy man, but things had not gone well. In two years, her sister was found in the river as she had committed suicide. Unable to cope with the sudden changes of the living style. God forbid, she wouldn't want something like that to her daughters.
The Crown's Obsession
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Please don’ drop this. It’ probably my favorite novel on this site.
Sorry if this is rude but do you have any idea when you’ll release the next chapter
Reborn As Papa Silva
Anime & Comics · hmak27230