Yes, it was a good chapter
A/N: Toru gets her own chapter because I am prone to getting carried away. She was basically a blank slate in the Anime/Manga so I decided to give her some extra backstory and motivation for why she decided she wanted to be a hero even with such a disadvantageous quirk. Did you guys like the little extra details I added to Toru to try and flesh her out a little?
Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
you're fine, it's good.
Author's Note: I was going to make the joke that I didn't upload the chapter because part of it got lost, but 30 minutes later I realized I had lost the entire chapter and had to rewrite it from memory. DAMN IT! Anyway, I'd love to know what you think. Does the writing seem too theatrical? It's something that bothers me because I never know if I'm overdoing it or not doing it enough.
Anime & Comics · SalveYing
what is his name?
His gaze softened as he continued, "Rose, I know you've always had this… attachment to the family's legacy. Maybe that's even part of the reason we never got close. You always seemed so focused on preserving things as they were, and I… I just don't need any of that." He paused, as if gathering his thoughts before adding, "In fact, if it helps, I'll make it official I'll take my name off the family tree if that's what you want. I'm not here for the family property or the company, and I never have been. You know that, don't you?"
Urban · LazyDiablo
thanks for the chapter
and the quote "I can fix her" shall appear once more!
"What the heck?! I… I sound like a freakin' psychopath!"
Urban · SleazyPen
thanks
thanks
what is this called? I've watched it before, but I don't know the name.
Thanks for the chapter.
Good to see you back!
Legacy of Harry Potter
Book&Literature · Graviele