徽章 4
Moments 5
Mugetsu085
thanks mate. I have 11 chapters out now. hope to get better at telling the story with time
Mugetsu085
I like story line,but you may need to edit a bit.
Mugetsu085
Looking good,room for improvement though. Keep at it.
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original Power Absolute
Damian appeared in the middle of the beast glades, with nothing to show his origins but a suffocating presence. He has managed to leave unknown but his power is too much to hide. Will he be able to hide his power from both his loved ones...and enemies as well?13 Chs 12 收藏
Really liked your imagination and the world you created. The quality of your writing is not bad but its not good either. There is room for improvement there. But otherwise, its an enjoyable read. Keep writing mate
Ravenfalls
Fantasy · abyssallock