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Elder Tyron's sharp eyes locked onto one candidate in particular—Brian, a noble child lying on the ground, his chest heaving with laboured breaths. The elder's gaze softened momentarily as he approached. It was clear from the boy's pallor and the glazed look in his eyes that he had overused his mana reserves. His limbs trembled, and sweat soaked his tattered clothing.

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

Fantasy · Rene_Tokiori

I must improve in seven of these categories. Intellect alone would be the hardest, so I will remove that.

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Fantasy · BrighterThanBlue